Mirrored

 

We move in different directions,

You go left I go right,

You go right I must go left.

Our moods seem to be the same,

You smile, I smile,

You frown the corner of my lips points down.

When you stare into my eyes

I see what you see,

That our the roads we travel

Take us in different directions

But we feel the same way.

 

Reviews

[Papaya]

Ah yes, I do know this feeling so well. Someone who is so much like you and so good for you but is as individual as you too, and on their own path. But hopefully the destination is the same. One likes to stop and smell the roses along the way - the other likes to stop and feed the birds - but they both arrive home together. I think that's love Dale. Knowing you can walk alone when you need to and come together again.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I enjoyed your review and reading your interpretation. Your thoughts are always valued.

[Papaya]

Always happy to visit Dale. :)

[barleygirl]

Very clever & interesting & thought-provoking. I find myself thinking beyond your message, to all the ways we might reflect similar expressions/feeling in some aspects, but we can also be opposites in our movements at the same time. This contrasting quirk of mirrored images is subtle & I've never heard anyone make the distinction like this. Very imaginative treatment of this idea.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am glad you see it many ways, that was what I was hoping for cause I had more than one meaning when writing it. Thank you.