As I Walk In The Field Of Dreams

 

Seeds of inspiration are sewn

Into the fabric of life,

Some dry up when

We don’t care for the sprout…

Others grow into beautiful blooms,

Ivy that makes us itch,

Or maybe fruitful hope

And even overgrown vines

That strangles time…

I tend to my garden

With a pen as my only tool

And my mind as the food

That allows my muse

To be the strength of the roots

As I walk in the field of dreams.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

You needed pruning shears. I needed rain.

Quite the read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

All I need are those seeds os inspiration.

[Lyn Anderson]

It is wonderful to wander in the minds and hearts of other people, spoken in poems.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it is :)

[David Scott]

Nice metaphors here Dale... Seems my poetry is an overgrown forest... I need a chainsaw to tend it at times. Ha.
Loved this read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My poetry is a field of weeds with an occasional flower. Thank you sir.

[Renée]

The "garden" my favorite place and it is.. as you write.. so many things. May your Muse take root upon the rock. Which I feel it is already. Really nice poem Bro ( :

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sis... you always have a beautiful garden of words.

[Matching Socks]

That's quite lovely and romantic too perhaps?
Your muse requires TLC. Tend to her and she'll bloom and grow, deeper in love.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is well said, thank you Ana.

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

This is wonderful. Poetry lives in your pen.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[barleygirl]

Your poem is clearly-expressed, centering around images of gardening. But I feel "fabric of life" is a bit cliché, plus it's the thing that doesn't fit with your on-going gardening metaphors. Another bump: vines strangle (instead of strangles). I like your overall message very much, tho!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I appreciate your feed back and am glad you liked the message.

[Ayvid N]

To me as of now, the mind is the key to keep the muse running and the pen fuelled. So here's to keeping the grey cells well oiled and happy. A beautiful poem on our poetic inspiration and our world of dreams..❤

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wonderfully said hon. And you liking it means the world❤️

[Ayvid N]

I absolutely love it! 💕

[Ed Hart]

amen and amen...nicely thought and rendered...may you walk all your days as a spokesman for the field of dreams

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much sir.