Falling For The ONE

Cool water

Drizzles on my skin

As bright colors

Fall at my feet

Painting the world

Into a beautiful portrait.

 

The light breeze

Turns into a chilly wind

Breathing life into

My dried up lungs

By blowing the

Dirt of summer

Into the by and by.

 

The smell of smoke

From chimneys

Fresh from hibernating

Is refreshing

To my soul.

 

The taste of hot cocoa

Warms my heart

To its very core.

 

This change of seasons

From summer to autumn

Is like going from

Being burned by lust

To falling for the ONE.

Author's Note

Autumn where are you?

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

There are sights, tastes and scents unique to autumn and they are most fleeting and inviting. I loved your lines:

Fresh from hibernating
Is refreshing
To my soul.

That is a mantra to someone who loves to escape into the hermitage that beckons.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I like that interpretation, thank you for reviewing and sharing your thoughts.

[Lorraine Montez]

Love it, love it! Autumn is my favorite season, and you've captured all it features, so delightfully! Can hear the crunch of the leaves underfoot, and smell that chimney smoke from here! But the last verse comes down like the thunder of a felled mighty oak, to underscore so perfectly the season's transition you describe. Applause! ;}

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much for the praise... Yes Autumn is a wonderful season.

[Seriana]

Dale, I see such growth is your words over the years. This piece is simple and beautiful. Poised to make a statement about the lovely season before us. Wonderful!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you sweetie, means a lot coming from you :)
Sure miss talking to you.

[Willard Wells]

Very beautiful and I like your analogies. Well done with nice flow and content. Thanks for sharing.

[andrew mitchell]

A great write dear poet on a favourite season. Splendid!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This poem has some terrific lines and imagery. Like an autumn leaf, it falls softly, beautifully, sacrosanct, falling at last for the ONE. It's a beautiful testament to love. Well done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much :)))

[AYVID N]

The colors of autumn are now so vivid, after reading this poem. You write so beautifully. I want to learn from you. ♥

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much for such a compliment... but it is I who can learn a a lot from you.

[AYVID N]

I have trouble maintaining continuity of thought, mmaking an impact in simple yet beautiful lines and I am weak on punch lines- All your plus points. Still working on it all, but thanks anyway :) ♥

[Tiana]

Love the visions you've given me through your beautiful writing, Dale ... Autumn is my absolute favorite time of year ... As always, beautifully penned cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It is my favorite too, glad you enjoyed my verse.

[LadyNaida]

Wow, this is so beautiful. I felt like i was reading a short love story. I can envision the scenes as I read the words to this inviting poem. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you for such a kind review. Glad you liked it.

[LadyNaida]

Your very welcome!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I really enjoyed this read very much. I really love seeing the colors the leaves turn as well in autumn. It is surprising how warm it's been lately. This also really made me want hot cocoa. Thank you very much for sharing. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I love this season too... I am glad it is finally starting to feel and look like it. Thank you for the kind review.

[Corset]

That cartoon avatar is adorable! it reminds me of Pepé Le Pew! There are so many things to love about autumn and you have named a good many of them, I love the way this poem warms my heart :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks. Thank you dear

[Corset]

I can't tell who is hugging who in that avatar but one of them is turning blue, lol. ps, you are most welcome :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Nobody is hugging nobody... that is Stitch dressed as a turkey :)

[Corset]

ohhh. hard to tell from here it looked like stitch hugging a turkey or vice versa

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I know it is hard to see.