Ashes To Ashes, Heart To Heart

 

Take it to heart

And the beat

Will last forever,

For no matter

Where these souls stray

Our love will exist

Beyond the flames,

And the ashes

That remain

Will eternally christen

The sacred ground

On which we once stood

Hand in hand.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Once again I say I wish I could write so beautifully. Your words give my faith new vigor.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You do write beautifully... thank you, your praise means a lot.

[AYVID N]

You are always welcome :) ♥

[David Scott]

I like the idea of creating sacred space. We do this s often... Without even realizing it.
Enjoyed your poem Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again good sir.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

That's a very powerful poem. A love that is never-ending even when it loses its physicality completely. Even in ashes to ashes, the love remains as energy, as two souls floating together.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so kindly sweetie.

[~]

I really like the phoenix exuberance of these lines and the eternity promise! :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you my favorite Moon.

[~]

awww, you are making me blush dear friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and powerful words my friend. You led the reader to real emotion with positive ending. Sacred ground. Please we need to hold on to. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again for the review and sharing your thoughts on my work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have always enjoyed your work. Been a hard year for me. Remodel of work and inventory. Finally catching up again.

[Renée]

Lovely Piece Bro ! Simple, Sweet and Clear !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks my poetic sister. Glad you liked it.

[Norah]

what a beautifully written piece of poetry..wow

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so very much. Your review flatters me.

[Seashell]

A sweet poem about eternal love.
Beautifully written allowing us to feel the genuine cry.
Thank you for share x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Babsie... always a pleasure to hear from you.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Very unique insight...definitely provides hope for all lovers who've been through broken relationships.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly for the positive review.

[Holly Mason]

Feeling the love
I mean really feeling...in a forever way
Deep words here cowboy...like em much
Sacred ground is tangible...love is free floating
Just a whisper of ash
Thank you for sharing fine sir ,Holly

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Holly for the kind review and sharing your thoughts.
Always glad to see you on my page.