Dust Free Dreams

 

The feel of the breeze

In your restless ear

Is really the sound

Of life passing through.

 

Your dreams don’t need

A magic carpet

And ride the winds of change.

 

Just the strength

Of freedom’s wings

So they can fly

Where sand isn’t blowing around.

Reviews

[Ruth]

They just want a chance to be and soar...freedom of the soul and heart seldom comes if we do not see the rubies within the dust :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I always appreciate your views Poppy.

[Fran Marie]

Vivid imagers fly through this short creative piece
Like the 'your dreams don't need a magic carpet line.

So well crafted...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks you Franny

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

That darn sand it gets in everything ......except my coffee :) and your poem :)

[Ms. Gruye]

Oh this is clever. I really like how you inverted the concept of the careless breeze in the beginning so that it is throwing sand by the end of the poem. Well done and viva la

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much.

[Zahra]

Your dreams don’t need
A magic carpet
And ride the winds of change.
Amazing. Beautiful lines.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so kindly.

[~]

Ahhh, that sand of time, and those dreams that we never dare to turn to reality. Passionate!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks beautiful Moon

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Beautiful, and so true how our dreams fly on the winds of change. Constantly adapting.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks for your thoughts.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Very welcome.

[April Child]

I felt like I was dreaming whilst reading this. Lovely evocative piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks you so very much for your kind words.

[jeannemarie coulter]

perfection in 10 lines...my dreams take flight on free wings of life...well penned...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words lift us above the storms and sands that try to cloud our eyes, my friend... that try to make us weep at the loss of dreams.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very well said good sir.