From Dusk Till Dawn

Your shadow fades into

The background of a starry night,

While the face of the new moon

Disguises its feelings well.

Still the beauty of your eyes

Can see through the darkness

So you can find me there;

Strong enough to be your rock,

Yet emotional enough

To be the cloud that brings the rain

When your eyes become too dry.

Till the next sunrise

Returns with the essence

You cast upon the world

That sets you apart from

“Just another pretty face”,

I’ll be the cloak

That keeps your fortitude warm.  

Reviews

[kitty]

Lovely! Sentimental you. Assurances sure! Words of comfort that wraps one, keeps one close and warm always.Thank you for sharing.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Gentle-Loving-Strong ... Wonderful............


Jazz

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you J.J.

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome.......................:).............Jazz

[Ruth]

Beautiful expression here Dale...romantic and free giving :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thanks Poppy.

[Renée]

This piece reads, like a gentle caress on a cheek. Tender, with strength..
You've grown again, Little Bro... Lovely !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you my poetic sister.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh my gosh!!Dale I am just blown away this beautiful writing.. So sincere. Your words echo the depth of devotion you have for her. She is insanely lucky to have you 😊 .. I loved this one... Just the right balance of light and dark here. Keep writing dearie. Much love and care ❤ .

~Freebirds

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Sophy

[Mazie]

Very beautiful :) I like the images you create! I love nature references in poetry to express oneself ^^

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Wonderful poetry full of strength, love and support.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

You are welcome.

[Relic]

~You've always been interesting to read Dale. You express views that are always full of wisdom somewhere between the lines. To have a strong side and a delicate side is--I believe--the key to having good relationships. This is a fine example of that.~

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[~]

A captivating poem full of promises to make the reader's heart skip a beat.
You never spare in brushstrokes of vivid imagery!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much.

[AYVID N]

My wonderful rock you are. Never knew I'd find you when on one lonely morning I logged onto this website four years ago. I am just blessed to have you in my life. The clouds shall part and the sunrise will return, yet I still feel blessed by the dark and the cold for your warmth lingers around me, always.

I am so proud to be written of by your magnificent pen Dale. I am sending you love and gratitude and the miles don't matter anymore.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well my darling Divya, I never knew I'd be blessed with the gift of knowing you heart and soul... it is something I will always cherish...