Spiritual Thirst

 

Heaven rains on us

Cause hell's too hot to handle

If your faith is parched. 

Reviews

[Ladysue]

oh Dale brilliantly expressed..when those hot spaces creep up on us, we certainly do have to find that place inside that brings us to the loveliness of heavenly gifts..wonderful!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Tiny dancer.

[Debra]

Wow, love this! Well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Matching Socks]

Not sure how I missed this, I love your Senryus. Always on the mark.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you, you know I love creating them.

[Lyn Anderson]

Beauty. These are still my favourite of yours. Well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, I enjoy creating them.

[Marie]

Almost a senryu here. Too many syllables in the second line. But a ood thought.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good catch, I fixed it, thanks.

[AprilRN1210]

thought-provoking, witty way of putting it Dale.. nice concept.. think my faith was drowned a long time ago.. maybe just lost at sea.. who knows.. well done

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much my country cutie.

[Jamestown]

Love it, simply and sweet, PTL

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.