Freudian Nightmare

Sub-conscious mumbo jumbo

It’s too hot in the kitchen

From you cooking all day,

So I am in the bedroom

With the air conditioner on…

If you don’t understand

My psychological reasoning

I’ll wake up from my nap

So I can stir your pot

While you sleep on it.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I enjoyed this! Great play on words as everyone else has said. Thank you for sharing :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You are very welcome!

[Simran Kewlani]

I think I understood what it meant but I'm not sure about it. Mind explaining it briefly please?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well as I always say that however you interoperate it is correct cause poetry is subjective.

[Rita L. Sev]

Clever bit of word play here, Dale! Freud would be proud! ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Ae thank s Rita, I think Freud would go insane trying to analyze me.

[Ruth]

Well....good old mind challenge keeps the spirit warm in winter lol Epic xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much Magick Heart, glad you appreciated my metaphorical mumble.

[Tiana]

I too enjoyed your play on words :) Enjoyed your poem Cowboy, as always ... Happy New Year

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much sweetie, appreciate the positive feedback.

[Matching Socks]

Excellent play on words Cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much Ana :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

too many cooks spoil the broth, but just the right amount, two, can concoct quite a recipe for passion.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So very true, thank you Jacob.

[Corset]

If you can't stand the heat get out of the kitchen? The word play in this was excellent, you always have such fun reads Dale :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is the phrase that inspired the poem… thank you so much.

[AYVID N]

A very interesting poem Dale. To each what they love to do on a holiday. But I love the suggestion made in the end. I like the sensitivity and understanding being shown.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again hon… always a pleasure to get your thoughts.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Dale. :)