To Kelly, With Love

 

You worry bout our future

Because of your past,

I am here to prove

That I’m built to last.

 

We all have baggage

That we must claim,

Damaged emotional luggage

That has caused us pain.

 

I could say it in rhyme

Or just give it to you straight,

My head and heart agree

You are my soul mate.

 

Kelly it is so nice to meet you

My name is Dale,

You are something special

That is why I instantly fell.

 

If you put your faith in me

I’ll give you something to believe in,

Cause you are my forever angel

Giving me my first taste of heaven.

 

 

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Absolutely beautiful piece, Blending lives and baggage always manage to be hard in the beginning, but once over the fear of past, it's then we see the wonderful people who surround us and truly want to be a part of our lives.. Sincere peice.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you sweetie… I always write from the heart, especially when it comes to love.

[Alicia Schroeder]

I do the same thing with most of my writing, once and a while I throw in a silly poem, but most of mine are based on real feelings, its great putting your feelings and emotions into poems or stories.. I love it :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yeah being silly is good now and then, humor is a key to staying sane in this crazy world… actually you have inspired a poem that I am about to type up and post.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Awesome, I can't wait to read it, i'm glad we can inspire each other..lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it is nice to be inspired by fellow artists. It is posted whenever you want to see it.

[Alicia Schroeder]

:) okay, on my way to read

[Lydia Shutter]

What a sweet romantic write this is! It's true, at a certain age, we all have baggage and scars. A new relationship can look past all that. Good one. Lydi**

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Michael G. Smith]

Kelly please take this leap of faith.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh she has, thanks.

[Renée]

Aww you look so happy !!! What a sweet song to Kelly !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Big Sis, yes very happy.

[Renée]

I'm tickled you are ! ((hugs))

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wekk I am tickled you are tickled (hug)(hug)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice movement of thoughts and beautiful description for the memory of Kelly. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much sir

[Sugar Plum ♥]

First of all, so sweet picture, a great couple in love! I like the easy rhyming way your wrote all, as if without much efforts, but with feelings and sense. She is a lucky woman to have a poet-husband who can describe her as soul-mate and angel from heaven! any woman would be proud of that lovely poem...

:: nour ::

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you for such a sweet review :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Ever romantic and loving. A nice verse.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again… glad you liked it.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

You're a lucky guy. When the heart knows things are right, there's no reason to argue with it. Go with the flow and I wish you both luck and happiness.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very kindly.

[AYVID N]

You have an extraordinary capacity to love and an equally awesome capability to express your love. Kelly is lucky and You are lucky to have her too. Two beautiful people coming together in celebration of love...Stay blissful always sweet Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you darling Divya, you are always so sweet to me.

[AYVID N]

I am so happy to read you so happy Dale.

[KWP]

aww lovely - lucky gal ... so real and honest and true xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much hon.