Falling…

Falling…

 

         So fast I catch my breath

 

Falling…

 

         Even faster that I have no control

 

Falling

         Falling

                  Falling…

 

At an accelerated rate

That I know very soon

         I am going to fall into…

 

Yet I cannot quit smiling

For I have complete faith

I am going to fall into my angel

 

         Where she will lift me higher

                  Than I have ever been before.

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

Awww.. its so cute yaa know. Yes falling for someone who will hold you tenderly is good. And its good to lose yourself in someone in whom you will find yourself. A beautiful.piece of heartfelt poetry. Kayleigh is so very lucky Dale :) god bless yaa both.

~Sophy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you so much sweetie… I appreciate hearing from you and your kind review.

[Sophy Freebirds]

The pleasure is all mine :)

[An owl on the moon]

So powerful and beautiful... the believing.. the living.. the walking in this perfect dream of coming alive and safe with your angel...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much good sir.

[Fran Marie]

keeping the faith...very optimistic write getting though the hard times '

only makes us stronger for the next challenge in life..neat piece..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

YEs it most certainly does, thank you Marie.

[KWP]

this is great - to understand that you are falling and comprehend that it is a mere moment and you will pass through it and on the other side know more experience and reap a new kind of elevation ... nicely put xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much, always appreciate your thoughts.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes falling is good...

yes.

and that smile...not forced, not painted on, but just naturally there with no restraint.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it is good… and a natural smile is the most sincere kind.

[Jennie Baron]

Wow! I don't know what to add to what the other reviews have said, but I sure like this one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Jennie, glad to hear you like it.

[Emily B]

falling and flying, poets seems to be obsessed with those

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes we do don't we… interesting point.

[Ed Hart]

i never leave home without my pairashoots...happy for you