Falling…

Falling…

 

         So fast I catch my breath

 

Falling…

 

         Even faster that I have no control

 

Falling

         Falling

                  Falling…

 

At an accelerated rate

That I know very soon

         I am going to fall into…

 

Yet I cannot quit smiling

For I have complete faith

I am going to fall into my angel

 

         Where she will lift me higher

                  Than I have ever been before.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Very beautiful piece...One of my favorite. I like the expressive way you write it, with the graphs of the "falling"...everyone felt this moments of falling" in so many ways, the fear from it is inevitable, but yet all we need to have is faith, and our angel help! Believe or not, all is true, and they save us many times...

:: nour ::

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Love is the greatest leap of faith you can take, but brings the greatest rush of joy.
Thank you for the nice review.

[Bright Ocean Star]

This sounds like one of my falling dreams. You're getting into my head again, aren't you?! :) It's scary in there, Dale. I'm warning you! Ha-ha!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I did get into your head, and someone locked me in :)

[jennifer little]

wow great write i enjoyed it very much amazing poem keep up the good work

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[mnicorata]

I enjoyed this poem tremendously, it painted imagery in my head which I think all good poetry should be able to do.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Rachelle]

Sometimes, we do have to take a leap to find out what life has in store for us.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is so very true.

[Ladysue]

Dale, a truly beautiful and inspiring piece of writing..knowing wherever you land, you will be in good hands..falling into your angel..love that line..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank so much tiny dancer. I always value your thoughts.

[Matching Socks]

A sweet leap of faith? :-)
Wonderful job here cowboy, falling can be scary but not when you have someone to catchy you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank Ana, you are so right.

[Arabella Schlitz]

A really beautiful piece of art:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Lyn Anderson]

So romantic, and hopeful, and full of reckless abandon.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, I think taking a chance on love is always reckless abandon.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

A cuppa, a smile, and fresh poetry in the morning! Great way to start a Friday! Happy Falling:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well howdy there, thank you for the nice review :)