Future 101

A lesson in senryu

 

It would be nice if

Tomorrow was the teacher

In yesterday’s class.

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

That is the truth! Think of all the angst we could avoid and all the things we could learn. Time travel can be tricky but it sounds worth it in your scenario.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the feedback :)

[Renée]

Oh.. that could get messy ! Great thought !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is okay, I am already a messy person… thanks big sis.

[Renée]

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[LadyAnn68]

Absolutely...this is insight 102 as well...lol hahaha

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I didn't know I had advanced class. LOL

[Pryde Foltz]

A wonderful and clever circular senryu. Kudos.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much Pryde.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ain't that the truth... It is said that experience is the hardest teacher because she gives the test first, and the lesson after... what a b***h... ;) Love this wise senryu, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Rita, that means a lot coming from a talented teacher like you.

[Lyn Anderson]

Paradoxical realities in favour of today's certainty. Hmm, not sure, but it's a clever senryu, at least that's what I thought when I read it -- I'll get back to you yesterday.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Okay then I will see you in tomorrow's classroom.

[Marie]

But if tomorrow as the teacher in yesterday's class, tomorrow would change completely.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is an interesting point.

[Briana O'Connor]

Very insightful well woven words. Well penned.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sweetie. Much appreciated.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if we could back and relearn our lessons, we would have done better on today's test.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You got that right, thank you sir.