Hello Beautifall

Well hello there beautifall

You are a sight for sore eyes,

So naturally vibrant

That just seeing you

Brings color to my life.

When you blow me kisses

There is a feel of you on my skin

That is so cool

That it warms my heart.

Even when your tears fall

They have a way of softening a soul

Hardened by life continually

Barring down on it.

You are perfect to me

Cause you make me

Feel like no other can,

For I feel so alive and happy

When I am in your presence.

Hello beautifall,

Won’t you stay for a while

So I can admire you

In all your glory

Before I have to face

A world so cold.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

I like the play on words title...beautifal...autumn makes her grand entrance with all her fall colors..lovely poem here with great metaphor

[Bright Ocean Star]

Cowboy, for a naughty man, you write incredibly soft and beautiful works of art. A renaissance man? ;)
Very sweet and nice write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much… well I am what you call a bad boy with a soft heart. A strange mix but then again I am strange :)

[LadyAnn68]

OMG...so cool..I hope you read this tonight on the WPOM....very very good! So sentimental. It must be a beautiful woman to admire form afar....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well actually it is about Autumn, the season :)
I had a prior engagement to night but will read it next week.

[LadyAnn68]

I said hello to you on the show.!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks, thank you. I will listen tomorrow.

[icelandicblue]

So inspirational and I love the play on word in your title.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, mama always told me not to play with my food, but never said I couldn't play with my words.

[icelandicblue]

Clever one ; )

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, this is such a softly romantic and longing piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much… so glad you enjoy it.
I am just a softy at heart.

[Lyn Anderson]

Funny, I am the only one who saw this as about a woman disguised as fall instead of the other way around.:)