Hello Beautifall

Well hello there beautifall

You are a sight for sore eyes,

So naturally vibrant

That just seeing you

Brings color to my life.

When you blow me kisses

There is a feel of you on my skin

That is so cool

That it warms my heart.

Even when your tears fall

They have a way of softening a soul

Hardened by life continually

Barring down on it.

You are perfect to me

Cause you make me

Feel like no other can,

For I feel so alive and happy

When I am in your presence.

Hello beautifall,

Won’t you stay for a while

So I can admire you

In all your glory

Before I have to face

A world so cold.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So romantic and beautiful.


almost thought you were speaking
of Autumn with the Autumn photo :)


Wait you were speaking of Autumn
and nature is just nature not Mother earth
I don't believe in that but I do see nature as
a woman with the curves and hills and slops


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece
and for your kind review and comments you
left on my page.


blessings. Benita

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully written in romantic words of longing and hoping she'll stay!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!

[Sami Khalil]

A glorified romantic write. I have come face to face with a great poet...:).....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very kindly.

[Purplerose]

Beautiful tribute! Awesome romantic piece of sharing emotions. Enjoyed! Xo :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.

[stars are far]

aww thats very beautiful, I loved it :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Patricia]

I read this one off line when I had a minute today and not sure if you sent me a read request on this one but I just absolutely love love love this piece of art! It has everything a poem should have! It can be about anyone or anything and it gives the reader to put their interpretation into the piece and make it about them. For me my first thought it was about autumn and then I thought it could be about someone you love and I thought DAMN, luck girl! Cuz it is just awe inspiring, and everything a girl would want written about them. Lovely and well- perfect!

[Rita L. Sev]

Flirting with Mother Nature, are we? ;) I like the joy in this poem, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why yes I am Rita :) Thank you very much.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Sometime a beautiful woman can make our world a better place. Thank you my friend for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why than you so much, coarse the beautiful woman in this case is the most beautiful of all, Mother Nature.

[Coyote Poetry]

She is. I agree. You made her come alive with your powerful words.

[Renée]

Your passion for fall is ShOwInG.. Very Sweet and passionate.. as if Autumn is a woman ( :

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Actually I know a woman named Autumn but yeah this is about my favorite season… thank so mud big sis.

[Renée]

Loved the new word you created too.. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you, thinking of starting my own dictionary.

[Renée]

You should ! It would be a fun read !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I have two words now, beautiful and also adorkable, cross between a dork and adorkable, which is what I am :)

[Renée]

lol ( : Start a book here..make each word a chapter.. just a thought..giggling

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hmmmm now that is an interesting thought :)

[Renée]

nodding ( ;

[Matching Socks]

Aww, very clever indeed cowboy.
She's a beauty indeed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Ana, she is the most beautiful of the seasons.