Angels Never Lie

My aunt recently passed away and now i found out my friend lost her grand father, so it got me thinking and writing, this is the results.

When the soul of someone

Close to our heart

Makes its peaceful journey home

The emotions are bittersweet,

For the loss of their physical presence

Leaves a hole in our heart

That no amount of condolences

Could ever fill,

But once the pain of the loss

Becomes second nature

There comes a special kind of serenity

That adds a fondness to our heart

Knowing that our loved one

Earned the right

To be part of heaven’s light

That shines on us,

Even when the darkest clouds

Try to drown out our spirit.

It is inconceivable to think

We could ever fill the void

Of a dearly departed’s human form,

We just need to remember

That angels never lie

When promoting a guardian

In life to the after life

To forever be by our side. 

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Good read, not sure about the part where grief becomes second nature but it does become tolerable as time passes by. Thanks for sharing your perpective.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you for sharing your insight.

[barleygirl]

I agree with your message wholeheartedly. The first 6 or 8 lines started out sounding a little ho-hum, with overused phrases, common for such situations. This is where originality began: "But once the pain of the loss becomes second nature . . . " I'm not sure anyone else would describe grief as ever becoming second nature, but becuz you did, it was thought-provoking & also true. The most original part is the tone, not sounding dreary & deep & sad . . . instead, a note of serenity thru-out, reflecting your message that death can bring about a whole new & interesting relationship with the deceased.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow, thank you for that insightful review... much appreciated.

[Briana O'Connor]

Very passionate and beautiful piece. Love the hope you share and the truth that lies with in. Thank you for sharing. Well penned.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much,

[B.J]

Brilliant you made me think of people precious to me, my Dad and Mum that are both with me all the time even though they are angels now. Lovely great words

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so very kindly.

[B.J]

you're welcome

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So beautiful Makes me think of my best friend and Sister Rania.


Thank you for sharing and for your
lovely review and comments you left on my page.


This one hit home September 30th Today is
Rania's Birthday I been crying off in on been 5years
I think since she's been gone she was 28 so she would
be 32 or 33years old now if still alive.


Thank you again.


Take care. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for that sweet review and sharing your story. Blessings my friend.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. :) I thought I would tell you Maintence starts Oct.7th on our apt. so will be packing until then we have to move into another apt. as they will be doing work on our apt. so I won't be on for a long while if you wonder were I am at. take care

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good luck, I hope to see you back soon.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I am excited to see the new work they've done to these apt. :) Take care ttyl very soon some time

[Baby Ricochet]

lovely sentiment. Thanks ......................

[Coyote Poetry]

"That angels never lie
When promoting a guardian
In life to the after life
To forever be by our side. "
A beautiful poem my friend. Death teaches us to appreciate life. To appreciate the people near and hold them tighter. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly good sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure to read your words.

[Purplerose]

This is how I felt when recently losing my Dad. Thank you for sharing. Xo :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for reading and commenting, so sorry for your loss.

[Purplerose]

Thank you very much. Xo :)

[Erana]

This is really beautiful, made me sad reading it, feeling it.
I agree with Pat the words that our loved ones earned the right to be part of heavens light ~
Makes it a big easier to accept
Great poem
~E

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words.

[Erana]

You are welcome
~E

[Patricia Wedel]

dear cowboy... my favorite Line is...
Knowing that our loved one earned
the right to be part of heaven's light.
Beautiful poetry. truly... Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much for the feedback.