Drenched

Drenched

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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A sweaty snryu

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Our bodies dripping,

Flesh glistens in candlelight

Before we shower.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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The mind boggles at the exciting vision you create here.
Boy how good does that shower feel after... Well after being sweaty !! Lol

Thanks for share x

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

I bet it feels just as great as getting sweaty, not that I would know anything about it ;)
Seashell

10 Years Ago

....Sure ;-)
This is very sexy. A vivid picture in a compact senryu

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you again my talented friend.
*Involuntary shudder* Woo....

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Guilty as charged and proud of it :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Stop dragging me back here, I just pulled myself together. ;)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

I cannot help it if I am tempting you, well okay I probably could but what fun would that be :)
sweaty is good if it can cause such a delightful shower....
especially when two are sweating.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

I totally agree, thank you Jacob.
Yes please.....lol.Love this Cowboy Dale ,sweaty isn't a bad thing at all :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Certainly is not, especially in the heat of passion. Thank you.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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