Coffee With My Muse

Grabbing two mugs

Filling them with hot java,

One for myself, one for my muse.

 

I then just sit back and watch

Her in action;

She stirs her coffee

With a tube of bright red lipstick

Even though she takes it black.

 

There is no way to take my eyes

Off her lips

When she puts the cup to her mouth

And blows;

Swearing that the ripples

Were rings of fire.

 

She puts her coffee down

Without taking a sip;

Opting to bend forward

And play with her stiletto,

Sliding it off then back on

While giggling like a schoolgirl.

 

Biting her lip just hard enough

To draw blood;

Taking a Kleenex from her purse

She dabs the crimson drop

Fold is up and tucks it into her bra.

 

Finally she picks back up her cup

Throwing it in my face

Then storming off,

Lucky for me it was cold

As the hardened look

She gave me.

 

I was left in awe once again

By her unpredictable actions.

So I contemplated what it all meant

While sipping my coffee

As I jotted down thoughts

Even I didn’t understand.

 

Though my morning drink was icy

My imagination was burning

The tip of my mind

Thank to sharing another surreal moment

With my muse over coffee.

 

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This is really funny. The schizo muse. Love it. Explains a lot. Ha ha. One thing - third stanza, I think you meant "puts the cup to her mouth"

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much, yes I hope it lets people understand me better, LOL… thank you for catching the error.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, I am good at catching those, and glad you don't mind me pointing them out.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Not at all, I want to know.

[Linda alexander]

Great expressions, clever writing, optimum imagination and reality

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I was in a unique mood last night.

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care

[Kayleigh]

Well well well, who is she? Haha. This was great... You just never know where your muse will take you my love. Well done. xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much darling, and you know you are my favorite muse.

[s y e]

Your muse is a tease Dale. This was very sexy and playful. Hahaha, I loved it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Now you know why I am the way I am, LOL
Thanks spaghettibrain :)

[Matching Socks]

Lol! That's a pretty funny scene! Very playful. :)
Little tease...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I wash in a feisty mood.

[Matching Socks]

Yeah, I can see that! I like. :)

[Frieda P]

Whoa, that's one sexy tease of a muse you got there, explains a lot! You knew I'd love this one. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much mush… why I never knew such a thing *evil grin*

[Emily B]

mmmmm. loveliness . . . glad to witness such a creative muse

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Emily, nice to see you here by the way.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"i fell into a burning ring of fire" but hopefully not her coffee cup...well, maybe that wouldn't be so bad, then she would be sipping me.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good way of thinking bout it… it could hurt so good.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

not sure what this was about but it was amusing.


This stanza's line got me and I giggled too
good that it wasn't hot as hot coffee
in our laps is very, very painful.


Finally she picks back up her cup

Throwing it in my face

Then storming off,

Lucky for me it was cold

As the hardened look

She gave me.

Thank you for sharing and thank you for
the laugh I had to take a peek was a interesting
read I have been resting my right wrist as lately it's
been hurting so not been writing much but I'm working on
2 new pieces that I may post.



My favorite Stanza's line.


Grabbing two mugs

Filling them with hot java,

One for myself, one for my muse.


Wish I could have a conversation with
my Muse he...he


Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Kindred… yes who knows what it all means, even my mind is a mystery to me sometimes… appreciate the feedback… blessings to you too.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. I left one last comment sorry didn't know you were going to comment so fast. Was a interesting read my favorite line here. Grabbing two mugs

Filling them with hot java,

One for myself, one for my muse.

Wish I could have a conversation with
my Muse he...he

Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You have a conversation with your muse every time you write.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I meant that in context to you poem I've not been doing hat for a while I been resting or my brain and everything has