My Northern Star

My soulmate senryu

 

It is said you should

Reach for the stars, so I touched

The brightest one, you.

 

Reviews

[s y e]

Wow Dale, this is so sweet and romantic. Your lady is definitely doing all kinds of things to your heart, you're on a roll with these great senryus and poems!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Sye, I appreciate your kind review.

[Matching Socks]

Love it, so perfect, short simple and sweet my brother!
Still a big fan of these, still unsure sometimes about what is Senryu vs haiku but I'm getting it I think!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much…. the only difference is haikus are about nature or weather, all other topics are a senryu

[Matching Socks]

I thought so too...
Anyway, I adore the senryus, they're way fun.

[Debbie_Philly]

A beautiful and well written Senryu.... Love it :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Deb :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are in such a romantic state these days...i am so glad you and kayleigh found each other, Dale.

a match made in heaven.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I have always been romantic, but being with the right person accentuates it… Thank you very much Jacob.