My Northern Star

My soulmate senryu

 

It is said you should

Reach for the stars, so I touched

The brightest one, you.

 

Reviews

[Marina]

wow! one can't get much more romantic than that. this proves very strong feelings for someone while still being simple and relatable. thank you for sharing :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very romantic in such a few words... lovely little Senryu for your lovely lady!! (or so I interpret this time)... you are the true romantic Dale! ;) Kayleigh, loved it I see just now beneath... well done.

- Elisa

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much my talented and sweet friend.

My pleasure really! I love to read your romantic ones lately ^^

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful!

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Julie :)

[maria ( rose)]

O M G !!!!!! love it!!!!! ♥♥♥♥

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thai you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

Romantic to the bones and to the stars. Excellent......................

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....

[Fran Marie]

a sweet and endearing senryu piece for your lady love...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank so much Fran

[Kayleigh]

Oh my my my, my sweet man, you really make my heart race and make me blush like crazy -- my love for you is eternal. I managed to get online (although the wifi and service here is horrendous) I also got this in your email and what a lovely surprise it was. You humble and spoil me with your beautiful words. I love you

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks hon, I love writing poetry bout you because i love you so much.
Glad you liked it

[Chris]

Dale. this one is just ...memorable... I really hope you read it aloud to your her... and that she kissed you silly.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I did read it to her and yes she did… thank you Chris.

[Marie]

How beautiful and tomsntic this is...and how beautiful she must be...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes Marie, she is the most beautiful woman in the world.

[Corset]

ah, what a beauty, she's a lucky girl to have a guy that knows how lucky he is :P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much hon.