Hand In Hand

Nothing fancy, just straight from the heart.

 

The moment that circumstances

Take you away from me,

Something is just not right…

Life is just unfair

When you are not by my side,

For you belong there

Cause your love is what drives

My desires to be a better man…

I know I can be naughty

And sometimes down right bad,

But my mischievous heart

Promises that it will be forever yours,

When you tamed it in reality

You really set it free…

Now it only wants to roam

Where ever you call home,

Even though I can be down right aroused

All day and night…

It is only you I want

Wrapping your legs around me,

Not just cause you are

The most beautiful and sexy woman alive

But because I am so attracted to your gorgeous heart

And your tender soul…

My past heartaches had me doubting

Ever loving one person again,

But since I feel for you

I can’t see my life without you…

Life will not keep us apart forever

I promise you that

For I will do all that I can

To make sure we are forever hand in hand…

There is no sacrifice to great

Since I found the woman

That makes any dream girl

Look like a living nightmare.

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

A sincere and honest piece. Great Job!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much :)

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW... what an emotional , Romantic deep piece.... it flowed beautifully.... Great job !! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much again Deb.

[Tree]

Nothing fancy straight from the heart. That is exactly what I gathered here. If you're fortunate enough to have a person to complete you it is almost as if you then are endowed with the spirit and drive of two, and your poem drives that message home. I can recall a feeling like that once and it was as if the world was splint in half for you, like a cold orange on a hot day. Thank you for sharing this sir, I got a little nostalgic reading about the magic in your piece

fine work, D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the kind and in depth review my friend.

[Kayleigh]

A living nightmare... You make me smile so much, baby. You know I loved this when you read it to me and I love it even more reading it again. Thanks my sweet, this is gorgeous. You know, you're the only man I want, I think we're stuck with each other. :))

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Stuck with each other,,, oh I believe I can handle that. Thanks hon you are too kind. My words are only as great as my muse.

[Fran Marie]

oh, very deep and ever so romantic...speaking words of true love...
showing intense emotions from within one's heart...well crafted poetic verse!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank so much Fran :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

musing like me I assume and just thoughts
you were thinking about.


this was quite deep and Romantic and sexual
but not over the top very nicely penned here.



These lines Haunted me but I really
loved these stanza's lines here.


To make sure we are forever hand in hand…

There is no sacrifice to great

Since I found the woman

That makes any dream girl

Look like a living nightmare.



thank you for sharing this lovely piece
and thank you for your kind review and comments
you left on my page.


Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for sun an in-depth and lovely review.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It's a pleasure my friend. You're very welcome. Blessings. kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

Pure straight up honest love.
Really liked this one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much my friend.

[Matching Socks]

Anytime my friend. :)