Wow!! This hopeless romantic is blooming!! This is beautifully expressing and co-authoring the greatest love story in history?! 1) I'd like to read this! 2) Sounds like soulmates! :)
Beautifully penned, Dale!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Ahhhh thank you Maddy, i always love when you enjoy my poetry.
you are just blowing away with the romantic side of you that has been so prevalent lately...
i like the analogy to not reading between the lines...
in first verse i read it "if only I had taken my own advice sooner"
but how...co-authoring the greatest love story in history...definitely soulmates.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so kindly Jacob… yes my romantic side is like a caged tiger that escaped through the unl.. read moreThank you so kindly Jacob… yes my romantic side is like a caged tiger that escaped through the unlocked door.
ok.... now... this... just isn't fair... I really do try to keep the hopeless romantic in my hidden, quiet, and pacified... This seriously had her jumping up and down from the sidelines causing a ruckus... I mean come on... Cowboy, we need to have a talk.... come here.... where's the bad boy?...... he still in there?.....
I honestly loved everything about this.. and the ending.. that signed the deal for me.... (giggling at my pun).... the ending made this.. it was perfect, romantic, heartfelt, and tender... Awesome write Dale...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Well I never said Im play fair… oh the bad boy is still in here he just has a very soft spot that .. read moreWell I never said Im play fair… oh the bad boy is still in here he just has a very soft spot that is oozing out… I am really glad you enjoyed this poem
10 Years Ago
Well, whoever your special lady is, she sure brings out the sweet side quite nicely sir:)
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
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my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..