Raven Lunatic

I think it is self explanatory

 

Caw caw is my freedom cry,

My wings are my pride;

Neither gravity nor man's ideals

Gonna keep me from flying high.

I have no need to answer

For my quotes nevermore,

Those who don’t approve

Of my free spirited nature

Can be the worm

I pull out of my grass.

Try to shoot me down

And I will bomb you

In the eye.

My attitude will cause some

To call me a madman or a degenerate

But the truth is

I am simply a raven lunatic.

Reviews

[Relic]

Ha, Nice play on words. Freedom and pride are a part of what helped build this country for most. Bombing them in the eye sounds like a suitable response to me. haha. Great poem Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[s y e]

Wow, this is such a powerful poem, Dale. You've written it with so much power it really blows the reader away. The message within this poem is strong and deep and very much relatable.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again Sye, I just try to be as direct as I can.

[Dhaye]

Simple yet powerful. You speak with honesty here. Very good reference, too, Cowboy Poe-t!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you my friend, what can i say a big Poe fan.

[Rita L. Sev]

This poem soars with moxy, some cool imagery and references to Poe - a trifecta, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Rita, you know me, a big Poe fan… appreciate your kind words.

[Marie]

This is not how Poe felt. I'm afraid he didn't have your spirit.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you, I always love Poe references.

[Jennie Baron]

This is just dripping with attitude and very audacious!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh thank you so much… I bleed, sweat and cry attitude :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Okay, Cowboy. Agreed. This poem is really good. The wait wasn't long, though. I'm glad.
Keep posting, I'm waiting for more exciting poems. :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you young lady, I appreciate that, I look forward to always reading yours.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"it came upon a cafe dreary as i pondered aghast but cheery"
Dale keeps his unique voice coming, evermore...
he is who he is...and we are quite glad that he comes knocking at our door to brighten up a midnight weary"

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Dang Jacob that is one of my favorite reviews I have ever had.

[Frieda P]

I'm still gonna call you a madman....unique read, muchly enjoyed...carry on big bird. ;)

Gonna keep 'me'

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Call me black call me white call me anything you like just don't call me late for the party.

Thank you Moonbeam.

[Frieda P]

You're an animal Dale, or a bird...if you're a bird, I'm a bird ;)