Thinking Outside The Matrix

Thinking Outside The Matrix

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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A freewill senryu

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When offered a choice

Between the red and blue pill,

I chose the purple.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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I like how you think and it's mysterious - we don't know what happens when we take the purple pill and I like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

thank you very much.
Taken both, eh? I'd have gone for the yellow. ;-) I loved this, it can be taken in many ways.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :))
an interesting choice...hmm..give me both... so I can get purple..my fave color

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you Fran.
That's very wise, Two pills are better than one. Three are better, and four are better still, depending on how much you can persuade the doctor to perscribe.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Marie
Clever little poem :) I liked how you mixed the two colors together and took both.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much… still waiting to see who knows what I am really saying :)
Well I see only challenges here the first one I am not sure if this is a reference to the movie which is loosely inspired by Buddhism if it where as such the I wouldn't think about it as the premise would be the acceptance of suffering not taking pills. Then I jumped into maybe thinking outside societal norms as a political environment damn it!! I am a dissident. Obviously not a methematical matrix . Oh sod it!! my favorite color is blue. And I will have hat with a whiskey chaser please.

Thankyou for sharing Cowboy highly entertaining


Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Actually I believe the movie is based on Christianity where Neo was the new Christ.
But than.. read more
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Rene Salinas

9 Years Ago

Well, bot brothers have written extensively about their intentions behind the concept of the movie -.. read more
There may be no pill to free one’s self from the most outer Matrix to get to the highest dimension of Reality if there are an infinite number of cascading levels of inner Matrices. One may only be jumping from an arbitrary inner Matrix to another inner Matrix that’s one level up where the illusion of Ultimate Reality is still manifest. To look down from the highest dimension is to simultaneously see everything through all time. I would have written the movie Matrix in an entirely different way. Reality is never what it seems to be. I’d take the rainbow pill that contains every shade of color. The only thing that we’re certain of is how we feel from moment to moment as we ride through this world, this strange funhouse of scary illusions where our spunky little colorful karmic amusement park cars take us. Have fun!

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you for such an indepth review.
Aethereal

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! Purple people are of the highest rank, royal people belonging to the Top Matrix; bu.. read more
I like to mix & match...clever one Dale.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you Moonbeam.
and i was looking for the yellow one...the coward's way out.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

hahah Oh jacob you crack me up.

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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