Of Your Love

The flame of your love

Could light a million candles

That could light the dark side of humanity.

 

The heat of your love

Could warm up

The dark side of the moon.

 

The flame of your love

Is a beacon that gives me direction

When I am lost in foggy emotions.

 

The heat of your love

Could melt my heart like wax

So I can be molded into a better man.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I agree that last line just melted my heart.(awwwww) .. mr bad boy has me all mushy-- nice job... I love the use of repetition here, it really "heats" it up... (pardon the pun)

I also love the way you describe it as a "beacon" very romantic.. and (foggy) ---great way of describing those confusing pesky emotions that sometimes makes everything so complicated and distort perceptions.

How lucky to have someone keep that flame burning and add fuel to the fire... I enjoyed this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hey I told you I am a cross between a bad boy and a hopeless romantic… so glad you enjoyed it… :))))

[AprilRN1210]

and as I told you---that's how we like em.... I'm definitely a fan:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much, that means a lot to me.

[AprilRN1210]

Why you're quite welcome

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

wow nice work.



I love it.


Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh thank you so much :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. I wanted to say more but I am a little tired at the moment no Energy to so might lay down for awhile. blessings. kindred poet

[Frieda P]

That gave me chills Dale, that line line is stellar, love it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much moonbeam :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Hello there! I love it. The concept is different and amazing.
(P.S: I am stalking you.) ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks, thanks for the review and stalking me :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha! You're welcome.
You might be the first person who is thanking a stalker. XD
Anyway, you're welcome. I am happy to review your writings and stalk you. :P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well you know I am a very different so thanking a stalker would be normal for me :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Yeah. I hope so. *Creeps*

[Marie]

Be careful something doesn't get burned up....

[lost girl]

I wish my love felt this brilliant:) Fabulous!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much.

[MsJewel]

Absolutely beautiful!

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Julie, it is nothing though compared to your romantic poems.

[MsJewel]

It is lovely!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice use of simile in this strongly flickering love poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so kindly Jacob.