Yep agree, just look at me HA beautiful right!! Inside, outside sideways, and upside down... beauty beauty, beauty... er.. just please don't look real close.. ;0)
The thing is, the world may be plastic, but we can be real if we ignore the hype... good poem Dale... keep em coming
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Dude, you are so funny but of course, once you grow up (because you're still soooo young) you will b.. read moreDude, you are so funny but of course, once you grow up (because you're still soooo young) you will be even more bootifuller ;-)
Cowboy, I love your writing. I love the meaning behind your poems and your huge heart of gold. Beautiful! I'm saving this one into my favorites folder. Great write, my friend... You've successfully redeemed yourself...:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I thought I replied to your review already… any ways thank you so much you are too kind?
But.. read moreI thought I replied to your review already… any ways thank you so much you are too kind?
But what do you mean I redeemed myself, I wasn't aware I needed redemption, LOL
I try to bluster through it, but I'm still privately reeling from your explorations in erotic litera.. read moreI try to bluster through it, but I'm still privately reeling from your explorations in erotic literature. Did I not mention that is why I almost didn't want to friend you in the first place, my steamy friend?
10 Years Ago
Yes you did tell me that… not all of my poetry is erotic,,, I just like to show my many sides.
10 Years Ago
I understand that, and I really like this side of you. Great write, my friend...
It's so interesting that back in the late 1700's women who were larger and had pale skin were considered "beautiful" by the standards of the era. How times have changed! It doesn't help that people are able to seek instant gratification in a virtual reality. Everything in moderation (even vanity)!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
hey I think back to the days when Marilyn Monroe was a sexy symbol, I wish that was the case now.
Ah, society imposes a standard of physical beauty which pressured girls/women out there to undergo several artificial procedures just to fit in. The last stanza is absolutely my favorite.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
thank you so much, Iwas just telling the other reviewer the media is responsible for girls starving .. read morethank you so much, Iwas just telling the other reviewer the media is responsible for girls starving themselves to death for the too skinny figure. Personally I like a girl with healthy curves.
A woman who has the courage to be who she is inside first and shares it with the world is one to be admired. So many are led to believe that beauty must be painted on that the real art of beauty becomes lost midst the bottles of make-up, botox needles, and other hype that is only a temporary fix. I believe a woman has a choice to enhance what she has been gifted with, but to take it to extremes robs her and those who fail to have the opportunity to know the woman behind the mask, so have the opportunity to come to know the heart!
A reminder for us to remember what is most important in life!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Yes that kind of woman deserves great admiration. Thank you for sharing you wisdom Hillbilly Rose.
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
About
Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..