Yep agree, just look at me HA beautiful right!! Inside, outside sideways, and upside down... beauty beauty, beauty... er.. just please don't look real close.. ;0)
The thing is, the world may be plastic, but we can be real if we ignore the hype... good poem Dale... keep em coming
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Dude, you are so funny but of course, once you grow up (because you're still soooo young) you will b.. read moreDude, you are so funny but of course, once you grow up (because you're still soooo young) you will be even more bootifuller ;-)
This is absolutely beautiful in both meaning and expression.
(We have been brainwashed by the media (led astray by media's trick of light) . It has taken me a long time to realize that beauty is subjective.
You have struck a chord within me with these words that couldn't have hit the nail on the head with anymore precision:
"It is ok you're not Snow White,
So put that poisonous apple down"
It is so easy to just blindly accept what we are fed instead of questioning and deciding what we choose to "eat"....
"And be the natural beauty
God intended you to be,
Instead of sleeping your life away" such a waste of life to always think that you have to live up to a certain standard that someone else has set for you...
The ending is my favorite part... You have made the hopeless romantic in me sigh with such intense contentment. You have skillfully weaved our fairy tale ending with such wisdom that rings as an epiphany when realized. I absolutely love this!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
You are so correct my friend… I am so against the standards the media and so called society tries .. read moreYou are so correct my friend… I am so against the standards the media and so called society tries to put on us, hence why I call myself Rebel With A Cause. I appreciate your detailed and insightful feedback.
Love the name and the outlook, if only more of us shared that same attitude..... My pleasure indeed-.. read moreLove the name and the outlook, if only more of us shared that same attitude..... My pleasure indeed-absolutely adore this piece!
What woman wouldn't feel beautiful if she had these words spoken to her?
Very nicely done, applause.....
... And a standing ovation.
(You just saved me millions buddy)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Why thank you so much, and you are welcome, now you can afford to pay me a consultant fee, LOL
10 Years Ago
No problem, just post your name, address and phone number right here.
I'll pay you in maple sy.. read moreNo problem, just post your name, address and phone number right here.
I'll pay you in maple syrup.
In the end, beauty is subjective, and nothing anybody says should be able to make you feel bad. Maybe you're not beautiful to yourself, to the media, but rest assured that you are beautiful to SOMEBODY. Somebody out there thinks you're the most gorgeous thing they'd ever laid eyes on. And you're beautiful to me :D
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Yep, beautify is in the eye of the beholder, unfortunately some people listen to the media's ideals .. read moreYep, beautify is in the eye of the beholder, unfortunately some people listen to the media's ideals instead of making up their own mind.
Most girls put on make up because they are not happy with themselves. But I like to believe you're only old enough to wear make up once you realize you don't really need it to be beautiful. That's a nugget of wisdom I picked up from Desperate Housewives. :P Some of us only wear it for the love of make up in general. We see it as an art. Nail at for example: It's a teeny part of our body. One that no one ever looks at. It's stupid when people think women paint their nails to look attractive to men. Correction. Women get implants to look attractive to men. Women paint their nails simply because they like painting nails. The way we look may have once been for the attention of men, but that was a very long time ago. Back when feminism wasn't everywhere. Now, our physical appearance is simply for our personal satisfaction. :)
You make some great points, I am not talking bout painting nail though, I am talking bout women that.. read moreYou make some great points, I am not talking bout painting nail though, I am talking bout women that go on fad diets, starve themselves or get plastic surgery just to please others.
10 Years Ago
Yeah I figured. I just felt I'd clear this up. :)
10 Years Ago
Oh no problem, glad you stopped by to share your thoughts.
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
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my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..