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Princess Of Illusion

Princess Of Illusion

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
"

It is what it is, no more no less.

"

Detox the botox

Cause you are not fooling anyone,

Especially yourself

When you look in the mirror

That won’t lie to you

And see no age or emotion

On your face.

 

I know you are no wicked witch,

Just led astray

By the media’s trick of light.

 

It is okay you're not Snow White,

So put that poisonous apple down

And be the natural beauty

God intended you to be,

Instead of sleeping your life away…

 

Believe me when I say

You don’t have to be a princess

To feel like a million bucks,

Just one prince who feels rich

With you in his arms.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Yep agree, just look at me HA beautiful right!! Inside, outside sideways, and upside down... beauty beauty, beauty... er.. just please don't look real close.. ;0)

The thing is, the world may be plastic, but we can be real if we ignore the hype... good poem Dale... keep em coming
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

10 Years Ago

Dude, you are so funny but of course, once you grow up (because you're still soooo young) you will b.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly sir. Appreciate the feedback.



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This was really good I liked it. Nice play on an old story

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so sweet. It's an eye opener for all those girls out there who change themselves for the guys to love them.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Why thank you so very much :)
Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome. (:
This is absolutely beautiful in both meaning and expression.
(We have been brainwashed by the media (led astray by media's trick of light) . It has taken me a long time to realize that beauty is subjective.

You have struck a chord within me with these words that couldn't have hit the nail on the head with anymore precision:
"It is ok you're not Snow White,
So put that poisonous apple down"
It is so easy to just blindly accept what we are fed instead of questioning and deciding what we choose to "eat"....
"And be the natural beauty
God intended you to be,
Instead of sleeping your life away" such a waste of life to always think that you have to live up to a certain standard that someone else has set for you...

The ending is my favorite part... You have made the hopeless romantic in me sigh with such intense contentment. You have skillfully weaved our fairy tale ending with such wisdom that rings as an epiphany when realized. I absolutely love this!


Posted 10 Years Ago


AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

Love the name and the outlook, if only more of us shared that same attitude..... My pleasure indeed-.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Well hearing that give me a big smile.
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

Well, I am glad:)
Great expressions well sealed in a beautiful poem, reader can easily travel with the poet, loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You welcome, take care
Very well done. Makes one think!

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Aww......

What woman wouldn't feel beautiful if she had these words spoken to her?

Very nicely done, applause.....

... And a standing ovation.

(You just saved me millions buddy)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Why thank you so much, and you are welcome, now you can afford to pay me a consultant fee, LOL
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

No problem, just post your name, address and phone number right here.
I'll pay you in maple sy.. read more
In the end, beauty is subjective, and nothing anybody says should be able to make you feel bad. Maybe you're not beautiful to yourself, to the media, but rest assured that you are beautiful to SOMEBODY. Somebody out there thinks you're the most gorgeous thing they'd ever laid eyes on. And you're beautiful to me :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Yep, beautify is in the eye of the beholder, unfortunately some people listen to the media's ideals .. read more
Most girls put on make up because they are not happy with themselves. But I like to believe you're only old enough to wear make up once you realize you don't really need it to be beautiful. That's a nugget of wisdom I picked up from Desperate Housewives. :P Some of us only wear it for the love of make up in general. We see it as an art. Nail at for example: It's a teeny part of our body. One that no one ever looks at. It's stupid when people think women paint their nails to look attractive to men. Correction. Women get implants to look attractive to men. Women paint their nails simply because they like painting nails. The way we look may have once been for the attention of men, but that was a very long time ago. Back when feminism wasn't everywhere. Now, our physical appearance is simply for our personal satisfaction. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

You make some great points, I am not talking bout painting nail though, I am talking bout women that.. read more
Blue Ivory

10 Years Ago

Yeah I figured. I just felt I'd clear this up. :)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Oh no problem, glad you stopped by to share your thoughts.
Very well said!.. agree, we should all learn to love ourselves and accept others' live for us just as we are! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Dang right, so glad to hear you agree with me.
MagicAl

10 Years Ago

*love.. typo there!! :)

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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