Beautiful Flower With The Gorgeous Stems

What can I say, I am a hopeless romantic and a leg man.

You may not see

The grace of your stems;

They have the beauty

Sweet dreams wish they could be.

Wrapping them around me

Is sure to cause a heart attack

Then revive me;

Reborn to heaven on Earth.

 

Your essence smells classier

Than an entire rose bush

In full bloom.

 

Your beautiful petals

Are of nature’s finest.

 

But those gorgeous stems

Are thorn free,

Yet makes my passion

Want to bleed.

 

Oh beautiful flower

With the gorgeous stems

You make it impossible

To not pick you

Out of the field of blooming flowers

 

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Beautifully worded and the images you have created are lovely. You are a romantic at heart my friend. Your poem is stunning.

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks Julie, yes I have long admitted I am aHopeless romantic, mixed with a little bad bod ;)

[Madalyn Beck]

A definitely leg man!! Hahaha! Oh, Dale, I simply adore this piece!! To have someone say they would pick that "flower" above all the rest is one of the most wonderful things for me to read. Fantastic work!! This write is beautiful, romantic, and the imagery is stunning!! The meaning is my favorite though! (;

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Maddy, your review moved me deeply.

[Pryde Foltz]

But those gorgeous stems
Are thorn free,
Yet makes my passion
Want to bleed.

The softest skin can cut deeper than any knife. Wonderful work, Rock n' Roll.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hmmm interesting thought, thank you so much :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautifully penned nice Job.




I loved these stanza's lines.



Your beautiful petals

Are of nature’s finest.



But those gorgeous stems

Are thorn free,

Yet makes my passion

Want to bleed.



Oh beautiful flower

With the gorgeous stems

You make it impossible

To not pick you

Out of the field of blooming flowers


thank for sharing this Beautiful Piece.

Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts on my poem.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome. always nice to read a fellow Romantics work. Bit of a book worm here. it's my pleasure. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Robbie~xoxo~]

A true testament of the "leg man"! lol

I think you have wooed many a flower with this write...

Sweet and lovely with a bit of naughty....Nicely penned!~xoxo~:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much hon… always a pleasure to hear what you think of my work. xoxo

[Dhaye]

They say that when you love a flower, it's better not to pick it because it may wilt; love and nurture it, just watch it and enjoy it's beauty until it fully blooms.

In this piece, you compared a woman into a beautiful rose. A usual rose has thorny stems, but here, it's a different one. Indeed, the heart can see the inner beauty of a person.

I like your analogy. Well-done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much… your review gave me a smile.

[Dhaye]

Hope to make other people smile because a smile a day can cure a lot of trouble, either physically or emotionally. =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is so true… that is why I enjoy making others smile as well.

[Fran Marie]

ah love is in the air, all the lady flowers will enjoy this piece to be sure;'
its sensual and truly romantic ...NicE PeN!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you kindly Fran :)

[s y e]

Check you and this romantic, beautiful poem. Now, I've seen and heard it all. I have never known a guy to have a thing for legs... Now I do thanks to you, my sweet friend.

This was so beautiful and romantic and filled with heart and love. A write that is going to make any lady swoon and you're gonna have every lady bluuuuushing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you, and it is not just the sexy legs that attracts me, it is the sexy heart and sexy mind that also matters. Your review has me bushing.

[s y e]

Haha so mainly things sexy. Lol. You're always blushing mister. You're Dale the blusher.