Lucy-fer

Inspired by a joking conversation I was having with friend about Charlie Brown And Lucy.

 

It just boggles my simple mind

How you continue be so unkind.

Getting in your unwarranted licks

By pulling the football away when I kick.

Undoubtedly messing with my esteem, no argument,

Maybe to increase your psychiatrist appointments.

So you found a way to make your business thrive

Not caring that you’re messing with human lives.

Just remember every bloody nickel you earn

Is another step towards where your soul will burn.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Hello my long time friend. I loved this cute little "diddy". I apologize for going into hiding for a long spell and not communicating with you or anyone on W/C. It was a healing process that was much needed.
Hope to hear from you
Hugs
anne

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No apology needed, glad to see you are back and hopefully doing well, glad to know you enjoyed the poem, it was fun to write.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAnne]

Thank you Dale. Hope you are doing well
hugs
anne

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Lol, this is such a funny and apt portrayal of the sassy and devilish Lucy... so awesomely titled that I had to chuckle. I miss the days of good ole Charlie Brown and how my day revolved around being able to watch his classic holiday specials... Linus was always a fav of mine. Nostalgia is so welcomed on such an eve as this. Thank you for sharing!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I love the Charlie Brown and the gang, even evil Lucy… can't wait for the new movie coming out next year…. thank you for the feedback.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

New movie, wha?? I am so out of the loop here.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I saw it on FB the other day, it won't be out till Nov of 2015

[Ghost of Jupiter]

anxiously waiting! TAZ!!! and the nostalgia keeps coming hahaha.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Me and Taz have something in common, we are both "good boys" LOL

[Rita L. Sev]

Hahaha! I love the exchanges between Charlie Brown and Lucy - she really is evil when you think about it! A funny, but very apt, take on this classic!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, I don't think anyone realized how evil she was. Even cartoons can bring many lessons.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

A wonderful double edged sword here spelled out in words, it starts so funny, but there is much frustration here well expressed.

I must say I am liking these darker writes from you... I know you go through a lot, and
you are always in my thoughts, just saying...

- Elisa

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you sweetie, yes it was meant to be funny but turned serious… but I am a happy guy and you help make me smile.

He he, I know you are :D and shall be forever! glad I could make you smile :)

[Lyn Anderson]

The uploader made the video unavailable to canucks,(Canadians) so you know. As for the poem, stellar write, great thought, and good imagery, and makes me inspired to send you to mine. Not at all the same subject, but you may find my Lucy entertaining nonetheless.:) http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/amendoim1988/1324268/

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much…. oh the video was just the opening from the Halloween special where Lucy pulls the football away.

[Lyn Anderson]

How weird is that - unavailable here. HMMM.

[Hayley]

I liked how this started off kind of playful but then got kind of intense. Such is human emotion, I think. After a while something isn't funny anymore.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, I was gonna make it completely funny but then turned serious, as you said, emotions are unpredictable.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Lol Lucy does it every time no matter what he always falls for it:)))))))))) great write:))))))))))

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Welcome I enjoyed that:)

[Renée]

Oh the devil in us all.. lol I always wondered about those two..it seem their roles were reversed..like little boys do things to get a little girls attention, i.e. pulling pig tales… that is how I have always seen lucy. Attempting to get Charlie's attention, because any attention is better than none when that little red headed girl is always on his mind. Chuck le ing q ;

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh we all know Lucy had a crush on Charlie, I mean what girl wouldn't, that almost bald head is irresistible.

[Renée]

Here's another thought..with Charlie falling all the time for Lucy...maybe that psychiatrist fee was really a way for her to save for their future? lol

[Rossen]

Very cute reminds me of the cold shoulder I feel from someone like this..as always you
find new and exiting ground to climb... nice!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[Rossen]

My pleasure Dale

[Robbie~xoxo~]

There's a precautionary tale to this, and you managed to entertain along the way... very creative, my friend! I love Charlie Brown and the gang... it's definitely a thought to ponder.

Well done!~xoxo~:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Those old cartoons have lessons as well as entertaining, thank you for the positive feedback