A Mystery That Shall Remain

 

Midnight stars die

In the presence

Of the full moon.

Foggy skies hide the pain

Of heaven looking down.

Sunrays wipe away

Any trace of sadness.

The Earth’s cycles

Recycle every emotion

In the book.

When you turn the pages

All the important words

Are scratched out

Leaving you to wonder

What are the real motives

Of the man in the moon.

Reviews

[Dave Brown]

just came across this, very funny
perhaps he is there to help the cow, just in case it doesn't quite get all the way over???
Just a thought

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That gave me a chuckle. Thank you

[Lyn Anderson]

You know how to deliver an ending, my friend. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you… I think that is the most important part in bringing meaning to a poem.

[Kenneth The Poet]

We may never know, but we know your motivation, to create excellent poetry.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

True dat, thank you sir

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thoughts to ponder upon in this well crafted piece!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You're welcome!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Whimsical thoughts revolve around the moon...
I feel a rebirth every time it rotates around us...swiping away the sadness, to recycle (made better)...

Thought provoking write, Dale... NICE!~xoxo~

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much beautiful… always appreciate your thoughts. xoxo

[TL Boehm]

the earth's cycles recycle every emotion in the book. what are the real motives. That's a powerful question. Well penned

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much… appreciate it.

[Frieda P]

I don't think he has any agenda at all, perhaps the one thing we can trust in life, the sun will come up in the morning, replaced by the stars and a brilliant moon. I like how you wrapped your pen around emotions and earth cycles Dale. Reflective and introspective piece of work here, outstanding job my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Moonbeam… you could be right that he has no agenda… or you could be wrong… we shall never know :)

[Lily Mae]

This is a time of reflection..a time to look back on what's been written and what's yet to be. And to wonder about it all is the joy, hope and future:) xo Excellent write..x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you wild one… you have some great perspectives.

[Corset]

and I do wonder about that, the phases of shadow and light, and all things cosmic. Loved these lines best:
Recycle every emotion

In the book.

When you turn the pages

All the important words

Are scratched out

why do some peoples books read like a fairy tale and others like a horror story, I wonder about that, loved this one Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much… so happy you enjoyed it.

[Ladysue]

Dale, wow, very philosophical and impressive write. mysteries of life and others and even ourselves sometimes can be hard to comprehend, but maybe it is in the recycling of emotions we learn what we can and learn to embrace what we can't know and maybe just instinctively feel. This write still has me pondering..excellent work..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much Tiny Dancer for sharing you thoughts on my poem.