Pre-Mature Fear

 

The clock strikes midnight

but have no fear,

for another will becoming around

just like everyday before it.

 

For reasons unknown

around the world

panic buttons are set

to go off when the hands reach twelve.

 

The end of the day

is not the end of time.

It’s the beginning of new chances

where yesterday’s experiences

turn into tomorrow’s wisdom.

Reviews

[written in blood]

very nicely put...... "Yesterdays experiences turn into tomorrow's wisdom"... such an accurate statement, profound and so positive... loved it!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you very much :)

[Tina Kline]

Nicely done. I like the positive message.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[RichGee]

Hope Aka faith is our greatest ally....I express that in Happiness, Joy and I...
Check it out Cowboy...love this piece

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very kindly.

[Dhaye]

Hope- that's what I can see here in this piece. Being optimistic will save one's future. We shouldn't be caged within our own fears.

Thanks for sharing this inspiring piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Glad to hear that cause I believe in hope and faith. Thank you.

[Jack...]

And yet we still sit there counting the minutes, freaking out as they pass, hypnotized by the rhythmic movements of the pendulum...back and forth...back and forth.

I enjoy the optimism in your poem today my friend. Indeed you are correct (pay no attention to that man behnd the curtain) Each new day brings endless possibilities, for even when that day ends another is ready to start. Very cool.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir for your encouragement and thoughts.

[Rossen]

"It’s the beginning of new chances
where yesterday’s experiences
turn into tomorrow’s wisdom."
I relate to the new chances, I have been blessed with lately...nice your here Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Plain-spoken honesty. Need more be said.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a stellar write. I like your complexity woven into simple form.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Relic]

There's a lot of wisdom in this. Great poem. I just asked Robbie the other day where cowboy's been. Glad to see you here again.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[Angel Bird]

Every stanza could exist on its own. Each one very strong, all together like a loud punch on a desk. Seems like you want to wake people up to see forward to the infinite possibilities of tomorrow instead of resigning after maybe failed experiences of today. You're bang on!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for your wonderful insight and encouragement.