Holy Storm

 

Those cries in the night

are angels lost in the dark,

blinded by faith

instead of following blind faith.

The world is capable

to twist you Cain

with so many not Able

to feel the Human spirit.

A beacon of light

gets caught inside

a black widow’s web,

but a crack of light escapes,

that is all it takes to light the way

when you accept patience as a virtue.

So the next time you hear an angel cry

prepare for the thunderstorm

by standing under the cloudy sky.

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

Cowboy, this is an amazing poem. You won my heart with angels. Absolutely delightful! Thank you for letting me read this one before I get ready for work. A new favorite for my favorites file! 100/100

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow thank you oh so much, such a sweet review of my words flatters me.

[Kruppz]

This made me think of a story (or a rumor, whatever it is! )

A serial killer/ robber uses a recorded tape of a baby's cries and plays it at night on the porch to lure empathetic women out of the house.

This goes parallel with the last 3 stanzas.

"The world is capable
to twist you Cain
with so many not Able
to feel the Human spirit."

Wow! Cain & Able! The above lines I interpret as people getting mislead because they're not able to listen to their intuition or maybe because they're intuition is not developed.

[Daydreamer]

A wonderful piece that provokes much thought. Follow your own light and do not be blinded by the beckoning light that many follow to destruction. Empathy and the love of your fellow mankind is quickly vanishing. Face the problem and take charge of your destiny.
You provide a thought provoking feast for the mind to digest with your skilled pen.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... that is quite a compliment.

[Star]

prepare for the thunderstorm by standing under the cloudy sky....love the ending...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thanks... Dance in the storm to show you don't fear it.

[Lily Mae]

This really captivates me. So many times we get lost in the feelings of being caught in hopeless situations and yet you honor those emotions by saying it's ok.... like this to shall pass with grace and ease...xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So very true, thank you.

[Frieda P]

I love when you wax philoshopical Taz...great imagery, good message my friend.

So the next time you hear an angel cry
prepare for the thunderstorm
by standing under the cloudy sky.

Love it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Moonbeam... never thought of myself as philisophical.

[Catrina De Maria]

Wow, just wow. A fantastic write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[TL Boehm]

A beacon of light

gets caught inside

a black widow’s web,

but a crack of light escapes,

that is all it takes to light the way
this is beautifully penned! and right on the money.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[ape domenigoni]

Love the lines:
The world is capable
to twist you Cain
with so many not Able
to feel the Human spirit.

Love the references in it and the way the whole poem flows. Definitely one of my favorites!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, wow really good hearing from you again.

[ape domenigoni]

I know, I'm very spastic with this site lol. Sorry about that.