Colors

Just a thought that entered my head and wouldn't leave till I put it on paper.

 

If life were black and white

skin tones would still be light or dark,

it just wouldn’t make a difference

if it were night or day.

 

Imagine if we all bleed black,

not knowing if what were spilled

was blood or ink

leaving a fine line between

the written word and death.

 

What of a world so white

that details are undefined?

The wolf could blend with the sheep

with little effort of disguise.

 

Colors don’t separate the world,

they give it character.

It is our perceptions

that decides the fate of their life.

Reviews

[Avalonya]

Inspirational. *Thumbs up*

[Star]

I like this. I like the last part especially about how color gives character and don't separate the world. Blood or Ink....I like the comparison...too cool

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks... I get philosophical now and then.

[Lily Mae]

"Imagine if we all bleed black,
not knowing if what were spilled
was blood or ink
leaving a fine line between
the written word and death."

This is just simply mind blowing to me.. You have outdone yourself. Sometimes it's those simple thoughts that don't leave us until we stop what we are doing to write it down...that have the most impact..xo Excellent as always Dale..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow thank you, that is quite a compliment.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a poignant perception, Dale!
Beautiful array of colors displayed...

"Colors don’t separate the world,

they give it character.

It is our perceptions

that decides the fate of their life."~ Lovely write!~xoxo~

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much for adding your thoughts xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure. X :)

[MikeV]

Well written, i enjoy your perception on colors.
Keep it up! :)

[Frieda P]

Love the parallels here, you colored outside the lines, and gave your brush strokes perfection..great read Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much Moonbeam.

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was mine, it's on my bookshelf now....

[Dhaye]

Wowowow! I like the analogy here, Cowboy.

What if there are no colors but only black and white?
You're right.
"Colors don’t separate the world,
they give it character.
It is our perceptions
that decides the fate of their life."

Very clever! I like the concept, very unique. Amazing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Beccy]

That last verse pretty much sums it up. A strong and vibrant poetic message that we should all heed.


Beccy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Melanie Genevieve]

wow this is absolutely wonderful. I love the way this was written. These words ring so true.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Again another inspired write... like I once wrote... everyone sees the sky as blue... only do they realize in truth the color is not so... As for color... the characterization is whatever makes you feel on the interior... not the exterior of which we as a society focus on the most...