New McDonald's Farm

Having a little fun

 

A pond full of slippery ducks

Makes the whole hen house cluck.

While the herd of cows go moo

I hear a lonely white horse go boo.

None of the pigs like a clean pen,

goats blame it on the influence of men.

When old McDonald had a farm

I don’t remember it being up in arms.

Or has my coming of age

Change my view of the world’s stage.

Reviews

[Renée]

E i E i Say it ain't So ! q ; very creative !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oink Oink, that is pig english for this is the only sound I make. LOL
Thank you it was fun to write.

[Renée]

the sky is falling and we must tell the king!...oh...wrong rhyme sorry q ;

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

There you go confusing me ;)

[Renée]

look into this watch...swing back and forth...back and forth...you are getting sleepy ..very sleepy..once upon a time there was a funny little creature called "chicken little" who was also a farm creature being a chicken ( ;

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The sky is falling the sky is falling.

[Holly Mason]

Old McDonald had a farm but the 2,000,000,001 visitors did it in
he had to go new age synthetic....and the ducks are slippery because of the lonely white horse*)
very clever there sir and quite a nice word smile
thank you for sharing fine sir

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I love your witty retort.

[Rita L. Sev]

I hear you - whatever happened to E-I-E-I-O? Everything changes as we age - and sometimes it is just ourselves that change. Fun and thoughtful at the same time!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, that was exactly what i was trying to achieve.

[SyberRose]

A cute and funny one Dale...yes as we get older everything changes haa...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Rose but the question is does the world change or how perception? Maybe a bit of both.

[SyberRose]

I think the world has changed and it will keep on changing but not sure how.:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I know it has changed, some for the better and some not. But how we perceive things changes too as we age and grow intellectually and emotionally.

[MOON]

Seems everything has changed , animal farms more scary then Orwell predicted for sure! Made me smile though , having a sense of humour key!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... I was trying to be humorous while having a point.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think your view of the world's stage has changed....as has mine over the past 40 some years...

this is so george orwell!

love it.

but i want OLD macdonald back.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow George Orwell, that is quite a complimentary comparison. Yes I want Old Mac back too.
read moreWow George Orwell, that is quite a complimentary comparison. Yes I want Old Mac back too.