Always Hoping

Frieda's senryu fantasy challenge- I bet you all thought mine would be naughty

 

 

I’m in a world where

Love is more influential

Than the roots of hate.

Reviews

[Zahra]

Loved your senryu, love or hate, what's more influential depends on what are you focusing at. Well penned

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is true, thank you.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Oh, to live in this world... Actually, love is much more influential than hate, in just about every situation. Hate is the "quick fix", while it takes more control and sense to love yourself through a bad situation. Well written!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... hate seems to spread faster than love that is why there is no such thing as too much love.

[Androglossia]

I think I'm in the same world as you. True. If you think about it, love is really more influential. The reason why some people - love to hate. I'm not being sarcastic here. I'm trying to be logical. I liked this write, made me think for a while.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is an interesting point... just seems people are more drawn to bad things that happen then heart warming stories.

[Androglossia]

True that. The reason why I reposted my gore poetry:D

[Rita L. Sev]

Now THIS is a fantasy! Love it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Unfortunately yes it is, thank you.

[KAOlmsted]

That's quite a fantasy world ;-) If only........

Exceptional Senryu, Dale. Truly inspired.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes, if only Vacker... but I keep the hope alive cause "as long as one heart still holds on then hope is never really gone."

[KAOlmsted]

Well...kimmer loves you xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I loves you too xoxo

[KAOlmsted]

:-) (better stop now, Frieda will tell us to get a room xD)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Or hose us down, actually that sounds like fun.

[KAOlmsted]

xD Yeah it does...especially as we stopped at a bar on the way home from Walmart and my hair REEKS of cigarette smoke *blech*

;-)

[AYVID N]

A great belief to carry us through rocky times. Faith is all we have. Beautifully expressed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Faith keeps hope alive... thanks again.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome.

[J. J. Nightingale]

"Wishin' and hopin' and thinkin' and prayin'

Your poem reminded me of this old song..

A fantasy indeed !

Smiling, Jazzy :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Great song... thank you Jazzy xo

[J. J. Nightingale]

Great Poetry !! :)

[SyberRose]

Nicely done...yes a good fantasy poem Dale...Enjoyed your words...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Rose :)

[Saumya]

thats a goood one.....!!!!
impressive....!!!
enjoyed reading.....
well done....!!!
:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Saumya]

most welcome...!!!
:)