America The Beautiful?

Getting in on the senryu challenge

Business As Usual Senryu

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The scales of justice

will never be balanced cause

it‘s not good business.

It Is Coming Senryu

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I elected you

so you could decide what is

the best foods for me?

Isn't It Ironic Senryu

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 Soldiers died for our

freedoms so politicians

could kill my choices.

 

Reviews

[Bare trees]

Yes, unfortunately I have to agree, I don't think America will ever be the same again. I have no confidence in our Government anymore.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I don't think many people do anymore. thank you.

[Sorry Infamous]

Careful,
Big Brother is watching you!
A very clever way to blow off some steam. I am sure you are preaching to many disheartend Americans here. A very sad sorry state of affairs.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much. Yes a very sad state of affairs.

[Dean Kuch®]

Whoa, Reb, what a scathing commentary, one I happened to enjoy immensely and agree with fervently. This was a very clever, slight biting poem that certainly grabs the reader's attention. If only our politicians had an opportunity to view this...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir... if they viewed this though they'd have the tax man knocking on my door.

[Androglossia]

It's true. It's all the same throughout the world, all over mighty federations. It happens everywhere not only in the mighty America. Cleverly penned.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I know it does, even worse other places. I had to pick a topic for the challenge... thank you.

[Holly Mason]

wow...that's it just wow
thank you for sharing

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you very much.

[Marie]

Excellent senyrus...very meaningful...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Renée]

Boy ! True, true and so true ! Well Done !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you

[Rita L. Sev]

Wow! Power-packed, each one! The last one is especially true. Excellent!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[sneer]

I'll ride with this cowboy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Well done! Excellent read and write. Our freedom is a contradiction.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.