Limitless

A sappy senryu

 

The miles mean nothing

When two hearts are big enough

To touch each other.

Reviews

[Zahra]

wow, this is really nice. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Sounds more like country (music) that rock Rebel, what's going on?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I am part country and part rock and roll.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I cannot argue with that.

[Relic]

Wow, this maybe sappy but it's big. Excellent.

[written in blood]

very true, nice thought.

[emmajoy]

How true is that! Very clever, Dale and also very loving. Clever you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much classy lady.

[emmajoy]

Laughing! Honestly Dale, not classy, not one little bit. Anyway, this is a great post .. so, is my pleasure. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I still say you are,,, and I am too stubborn for you to change my mind, LOL

[emmajoy]

ok i give up, far too tired to argue .. must sleep, nite, nite :).

[Katie]

Short & beautifully sweet. I'm grateful all my loved ones are within close distance, sometimes too close ;)!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you sweetie... good to hear from you.... hey I am not within close distance.

[lee von cleef]

I like the thought ,but it is tougher on a young man.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I think it is tough for anyone, but always worth it,

[Lily Mae]

I love this.. for all my own selfish reasons..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well as long as you have reasons :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love this, considering how their are online relationships and friendships, where someone wishes to be by their side where they are. This is indeed a "sappy senryu" but a lovely and true emotional one. I enjoy how touching it is how you explain the "two hearts are big enough to touch each other" no mater the miles.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Circe]

good to see pieces like this from you cause you do them so well. sappy or not, we all really need this belief. thank you for the radiance.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, glad you appreciated it,