A Face In The Clouds

 

She gazes with mysterious eyes

seeing things others only dream to see.

 

Her breath is like a gentle breeze

that brings flight to things cast aside by the living.

 

She’s got touch that leaves no physical prints

but helps those paralyzed by fear feel again.

 

Though no one has met her

those with compassion in their hearts

know her intimately.

 

You don’t have to seek to find the spirit

that lives within us all,

just look without your eyes.

Reviews

[Robert James Parfett]

Really like this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[written in blood]

(just look without your eyes)..... clever.. feel within your soul for a deeper understanding.. I like this!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[KAOlmsted]

This is so beautiful...you really do have such a deep, romantic soul, and it shines in this piece. Well done. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, Dale. Truly lovely.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much vacker, it mean a lot coming from you. Yes I am a hopeless romantic.

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure, älskling :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks vacker :)

[†Tracey†]

This is so beautiful.. and such a truth and inner knowing of the heart, love and spirit that can exist..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well said wild one, thank you xo

[Renée]

Beautiful Cowboy ! Unearthly beauty !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... yes you are :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

What? Where did your comment go?

[Renée]

chuckling... I bet you say that to all the girls.. My pleasure

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Only the ones that deserve it :)

[Renée]

.I know i can be shy...but that is pretty bad when my own comment goes into the wall paper without my help lol oh W C

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

LMAO!!

[PP]

I am wowed :) awesome Dale..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am honored... Thank you.

[PP]

my pleasure :)

[Seashell]

Oh I agree.. We have a face for the world... But in our actions is our true spirit leading the way..... springing forth from hidden depths..from a place we are not even remotely familiar with....Just like the face in the cloud... It's there for all to see.. If one wishes !!
Beautifully written .. Ty xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Babsie Boop

[Lily Mae]

A great sense of knowing..seeing with your heart and trusting that as your eyes true sight. As always you amaze me...xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much... that is a sweet compliment xo

[Lily Mae]

I can do sweet once in awhile..x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I know, that is why I feel privileged :)

[Dayran]

Great suggestion Dale. Yeah I did. She says now that you're cool.

[ScottTheScreenwriter]

Good work, enjoyed reading this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you.