Too Strong To Fall(Too Tough To Stand)

  

I see the eye of the hurricane

whenever we get into a staring contest.

 

In these moments it is like being frozen in time

like a fly caught in a spider’s web.

 

I never struggle to get free

instead simply pretend I am in a cocoon.

 

Every time you stand your ground

I feel mine getting sturdier.

 

Huff and puff with all your might

my lung capacity just keeps getting larger.

 

Your unstoppable force meeting

my immoveable object

keeps our structure from falling either way

making these walls earthquake proof

even though we put each other six feet under.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah, the forever union of souls, you lend strenght to wording, well done, good read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome x

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Need some music and we have a song to sing. Those hurricane are the best days of a life. Good to be uplifted and tossed around. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much kind sir.

[Norma M Sutton]

lol Whatever works :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Got that right :)

[AYVID N]

Perfectly picture of holy matrimony! For better or worse!
We become veterans eventually...two infallible wrestlers... in perpetual combat. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I like that... too funny. But no doubt true. It can be a war alright.

[AYVID N]

:) but I wouldn't have it anyway other! Love the fiend! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I hear ya... love is grand. maybe I will find it again someday.

[AYVID N]

i do wish you all the luck friend! :)

[†Tracey†]

Unstoppable forces, an immovable object.. and six feet under.. hmm have you been peeking in my diary..lol

Like usual.. you nail your thoughts and allow us to feel for a moment.. thank you..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much... oh and I only peek at the naughty stuff ;)

[Androglossia]

Combination can sometimes get complicated. Just because two people share a wall or a feeling doesn’t mean they always form a perfect union. But if two people are inseparable regardless of circumstance or diffrences, then they are a perfect combination. Match made in heaven:) Nice write, Sir. As always.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much for your insight, I agree with you.

[Androglossia]

As always:)

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~ you write extremely thought-provoking poetry, monsieur... this particular piece reminds me of the conversation that takes place in the first few minutes of kill bill volume one... (the one in which uma thurman defines her perception of what even steven means) and the last line reminds me of the coffin scene in kill bill volume two... i dunno if you're a fan of quentin tarantino but i am... so i truly mean it when i say this is remarkable work... it makes me wonder about the two characters in this piece... if i was one of them, i'd return to the surface from six feet under... oh... and this piece also reminds me of the jethro tull classic called "too old to rock and roll and too young to die"...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I have not seen that movie but I enjoyed your feed back.

[Seashell]

Opposites attract right ?
Great stuff xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is so true Babsie Boop.

[lee von cleef]

that's the problem with Perseverance, there you are in the pit, but maybe that's where God wants ,Look at the bright side you will rule Egypt one day.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I like that idea.

[Cassie Fraga]

WOW... some powerful stuff here mistah. 100/100 on my rating!!
AWESOME READ AS ALWAYS!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much sweets and welcome back.