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Senryu release

 

If you don’t want me

to respond, don’t criticize

my way of thinking.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Ever action results in an equal and opposite reaction. Law of momentum holds good.
Loved this! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very nicely stated, thank you.

[The Analog Kid]

Well, that sums it up. Back off b***h...lol!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thumbs up.

[Frieda P]

SWEET!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

But it is not suppose to be, LOL

[Frieda P]

You know what I mean...knowing the reasoning behind it, sweet as in revenge! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I know... I had to mess with you ;)

[Frieda P]

I know, you have that sarcasm gene too! ;-P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No wonder we get along so well.

[Frieda P]

:-D

[Muse]

not even constructive criticism?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

constructive is fine... I am just saying if you do criticize then you better expect a response... this poem originated from someone yesterday trying to tell me how I should review.

[Muse]

well I would really piss them off...I lack seriousness most of the time. lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

They told me to comment on the poem not the subject matter... I told them I will comment how I want :)

[Muse]

how about no comments...maybe they would prefer that? I had someone delete my comments..said I distracted from the poem itself. I said really? My comment is better than your poem then...they felt threatened? lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It wasn't even the persons poem, it was someone else's.

[Muse]

Then they must be bored. Is somebody picking on you? Do you need the big bad Muse to go get em?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

NO no no, I can handle them, they went running when I called em out... the person has been a round a long time and thinks he is the be all end all of writing.

[Muse]

10-4

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Over and out... now lets start us a convoy , LOL

[Muse]

this girl knows trucker talk..from IA ya know?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You certainly got the mouth of a trucker, LOL

[Muse]

frucker... ha ha ha

[writing mojo]

ha ha right on! , ego, id and line and sinker, all had me hooked in this piece...great stuff

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Renée]

chuckling & a 5 high with a fist bump !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

5 and bump back atcha.

[LA Lorena]

oh, clever boy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... I try to be :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks.

[KAOlmsted]

:-D I love it, Dale. Good on ya.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Kimmers, coarse I know to expect the same from you.

[KAOlmsted]

Naturally ;-) My pleasure.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

:-))))))