Outlaws

Two senryus with similar ideas

 

The smallest of flames

can turn anything to ash.

Should we ban lighters?

 

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Love’s responsible

for destroying many lives;

still not illegal.

 

Reviews

[robing123456]

that will make for a great t-shirt! short, sweet and profound.

[Sarah Redigan]

Very very true ...

[lee von cleef]

What are you going to buy? A silk screen tie die T- Shirt factory, Say? Tahiti ?Where they don't where tops?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Sounds like a good plan to me.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Damn, every English teacher should make these senryu part of their normal compare and contrast exercises.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[writing mojo]

I love the pyramid intersecting this piece
the different ideas intersect nurture vs nature code,
crimes of passion both lead too..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

A very unique perspective. Thanks for expressing your thoughts.

[Pain&Suffering]

This is so true.

[The Analog Kid]

Hell yeah. I like the double outlaws:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Muse]

This made me think of the following:

We can take away guns
but not their free will to kill

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is a good one... I like that. thank you.

[Kaylor Mason]

The real battle is not teaching people right from wrong nor even making them do right. The real fight is making them want to do right. Making people want to do what's right, rather than what's easy . . . teaching people virtue is one thing. Inspiring them to practice it--that's something else. That's where Christ's love comes in, to transform people on a purely spiritual level--human beings can't teach that stuff to the human spirit

[Frieda P]

haha, some love is illegal me thinks ;-)

very clever Dale...both very concise and twisted. Like!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So very true... especially when you are a teacher or priest, LOL

[Frieda P]

oh no you didn't...........................................

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Actually I did... the proof is right there ;)

[Frieda P]

haha I know, don't get me started on that topic, there''ll be threads crashing and thunderbolts coming out of my arse! ha

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That sounds painful... hint taken :)

[Frieda P]

haha yeah it is!