A Vision In The Night

After a couple hard rants I thought it was time to get in touch with my softer side again.

 

 

Her radiance glows

like the sunrise,

bringing a mysterious beauty

to every midnight.

Now that I see the darkness

in a whole new light

when I close my eyes

my vision is sharp enough

to see beyond heaven,

while my soul interprets hell

as merely a unicorn.

Reviews

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~ a very skillfully written...rather perplexing piece of poetry... very thought-provoking work, monsieur...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

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~ you're very welcome...

[Wolfwind]

This piece really slipped into my head and turned on some gears that I didn't know existed... yet.. I'm really not sure what the piece's overall flavor is. I think it's along the lines of as time moves people change and the eye sees old clothes in a new way. As our vision adapts, we are better able to see the one bad apple, rather than having to deal with an entire wall of darkness? That's what I see in it anyway. =)

I'm probably over thinking it.. lol Nice Ink!
Aaron

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Interesting perspective, thanks for sharing.

[Tina Kline]

A very tender and romantic poem. Love can make the seemingly impossible possible and somehow can make the ugly go away. Love makes everything shine wonderfully When love is returned it's powerful and magical!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautiful poem. This is definitely a soft touch RockNRoll. Love can be seen only when the mind truely believes, it is then the visions materialize. I really enjoyed this. A lovely poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Marie]

Quite lovely...love takes you to a new dimension..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you,

[Chris]

and it isn't even spring... I soooo wish you well man.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Ahhh spring, can't wait. Thank you sir.

[AYVID N]

A soul-stirring tribute to someone much loved, someone with the power to take your darkness and turn it into light, enhancing your vision and making your troubles seem insignificant and distant!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Exactly right. Thank you sweetie.

[eglantine]

This is def a different side of you! lol Nice to see it

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Dayran]

In the Empire of the Sun, a young man would stop at nothing to set all the wrongs in the world right. He does that in some way, in the way that he might have perceived his own actions. But his hardest task still eluded him. He might have known something of it but not enough. Only that he himself is the center of his concerns about justice and liberty in the world.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Interesting thoughts.

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is truly lovely, to adore someone so much that they allow you to see heaven and to believe that hell can't exist. Beautifully written.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)