The Internal Question

Insane in the senryu

 

 

Neither here nor there,

Then where oh where has it gone?

Lost:  My sanity.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

I hereby christen Dale Deadmond WC's resident-in-excellence senryu writer.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Cherrie]

it is always the last place you look- great senryu

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well then I guess I haven't looked everywhere, LOL
Thank you

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! Yup. I feel like this all the time. Only I'm pretty sure I'm the only sane one and the world around me is stark raving mad ;-) Great stuff.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So insane that you are sane... interesting concept.

[KAOlmsted]

Welcome to my world ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

OMG I am in your world... how do I get out of here? Someone help me, I am trapped, LOL

[KAOlmsted]

Like you didn't bribe the doorman to get in ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Damn... you caught me.

[Circe]

Sanity and logic are not very good for us anyhow, I love that description "insane in the senryu" haha like the song, definitely a poem to keep in the back pocket.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are right, sanity is overrated... plus it limits your creativity... after all the best artists are always a bit off.

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~ haha... hilarious...!!! ~ this is the "eternal" question (for me at least)... :P
~ thank you for thinking aloud and articulating it in such a profoundly poetic way... i admire your courage and earnestness... it reminds me of one of paul's poems in which he spoke about "madness as a profession"... :P ~ p.s. i tried to google this once but got no answer... :P

[Renée]

oh dear.....I saw it running passed just a minute ago ....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are lucky it didn't stick around and cause trouble.

[Renée]

giggle!

[Frieda P]

If you find it, check if mine is there too. Good one!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I think mine is like the other sock after the drier... Gone!!

[Frieda P]

haha, yeah forget about that, you'll never find it again....

[ms. barrie]

love this! clever, little senryu you wrote here. exactly where is my sanity? (also asking myself where my other reading glasses are lol.) -- i really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing :) - 100 to 100 - Happy New Year 13'!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you, insanity can make you do great things, LOL

[ms. barrie]

yes, the demons and i agree with you :) --- and you are verily welcome

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You might like the tagline I just put up.

[ms. barrie]

probably would :)

[ms. barrie]

yes i do :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I quote from Nikki Sixx.

[ms. barrie]

yes, i thought it sounded somewhat familiar :)

[Muse]

have you found it yet?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Nope, I decided not to look for it... if it comes back to me it was meant to be :)

[Sheila Kline]

This is a question I often ask myself!! Maybe it is behind me....lol
I continue to be amazed at the level of thought that can be included in so few words!
But then again, when one is insane we won't know where we lost it!!
And, I want one of those Starbuck coffees, and a six pack, and chocolates, and, and, and...........more!! It I can't have them then I am even more insane! I'm taking a coffee break after this!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The is some great logic Sheila, so logical it is insane, thank you.