The Layers Of Real Value

Keeping up with the Senryus

 

The rainbow’s colors

Are worth more than what is in

The pot at the end.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Now that is a truth that could not be put any more wonderfully. Well done! =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with the poem. Most folks find a empty treasure chest at the end of the journey. The rainbow is a gift for the eyes and hope. Thank you for the poem. Happy New Years my friend.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Agreed, the journey is more fulfilling spiritually then what lies at the end.

[Marie]

Very true...very nice senyru...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[KAOlmsted]

Perfection on the page...this is going into my favorites. Love this. Thanks, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the kind compliment.

[KAOlmsted]

Thank you for this exquisite piece.

[Lost in Wonderland]

ahhh i loved this so much:) its rare catching me adoring a haiku or senryus but this was beautiful
God bless

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, really glad you liked it.

[Lost in Wonderland]

No problem at all

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~ interesting... and beautifully expressed... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)