Candle In The Rain

God bless the innocent taken to soon in that Connecticut school. May the light last long enough to see us through this dark day.

 

  

A single flame burns

inside the fallen rain,

protected by the breath

of a determined angel

seeking solace for the innocent

paralyzed by madness

before their act

received its curtain call.

Though it knows that the candle

cannot last forever

it knows the light should

weather the storm.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Dale..this is one of your most beautiful writings.
No other words could have expresssed the sorrow more deeply:

"Though it knows that the candle
cannot last forever
it knows the light should
weather the storm."

- Having been personally affected by the tragedy, like everyone else...I just find so much solace in these incandescent words.

Thanks to you for writing this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... it was one of the hardest things I ever wrote cause I was emotionally stunned at the moment.

[AYVID N]

You did it awesomely. Just like you.

[s y e]

Wow, this was amazing! Very touching!!

[writing mojo]

wow!, may the light of this poem never go out, but reflect on memories with what is to come..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[EmpressPoetess]

Very touching and heartfelt. What a tragedy. Our prayers are with the many people affected by such a horrible act of selfishness and heartless inconsideration for the sanctity of life. My heart aches. Thank you for this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you for reading and your compassionate response. Good to hear from you.

[Brittany]

This spoke to me after what had happend on friday to all the kindos passed away.So thank you for writing this peice it is amazing!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for reading and responding.

[Renée]

I can tell this came from the deepest part of your heart..silently leaving tears...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sweetie... a moment of silence and a prayer.

[Renée]

(hugs)

[Lily Mae]

This is beautiful.. thank you for sharing..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for reading xo

[J. J. Nightingale]

Soft , prayerful .. beautiful ..


Has Heart .. Jazz

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Jazzy, you have tons of heart too.

[J. J. Nightingale]

:) ...

[Tree]

A truly incomprehensible event. The last time I felt this way, this numbness this inability to wrap my mind around the reason or the cause was 911. Children, between 6 and 7 executed because a man/boy couldn't control his rage? I say this has nothing to do with being crazy, or sick this person was already dead. Dead inside. Dale I admire you for this act of healing

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That was no man or boy, it was a monster... pure evil. I wish I could do something real important to help the healing. What a sad day it was.

[Marie]

You said this beautifully...words I wish had been mine...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, it was hard to find the words.