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Abstract Twins

Abstract Twins

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

Their eye color is the same

but the way they stare

reflects differently in the mirror…

One intense enough

to start a wildfire,

the other so calculating

it could freeze hell over.

When they run their hands

down my body

I get the same erotic sensation,

it is the fingerprints they leave behind

that distinguishes their intentions…

While one leaves a tingling aftershock

the other dirties my senses

enough to make my skin crawl

six feet under.

It is hard to believe

that identical images

could create two distinctly

different interpretations.

When she leans slowly in

my lips tremble with

anticipation and fear

not knowing whether

 the next kiss

will fill my heart up

or bleed it dry.

© 2012 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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~ this is a very powerful piece of writing... it fills me with fear for such people... and i really needed to read it because sadly i don't know what the world is truly like... i never used to acknowledge the presence of such characters... now, when i have to face them, i'm shocked... so, this post is of educational value to me, monsieur... i know two sisters on this site... one has blocked me and the other hasn't... and though in this post, you say that one of the twins is capable of filling your heart, my guess is that in reality they're just playing good cop and bad cop and both will turn out to be parasitic...

Posted 11 Years Ago


THis would be quite an erotic experience...

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

No doubt, I think living on the edge always is.
I love dark poems like this of dualities and sinister sensuality. "it is the fingerprints they leave behind that distinguishes their intentions" a very sharp perception.. deadly in its accuracy. A marvelous, titillating write... the last three lines especially knocks the wind out of my lungs.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

WOW... thank you so much, I am flattered by your review... a tender touch is nice but a wicked sensa.. read more
Circe

11 Years Ago

yes you have achieved that here! :)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

:)

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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