Abstract Twins

 

Their eye color is the same

but the way they stare

reflects differently in the mirror…

One intense enough

to start a wildfire,

the other so calculating

it could freeze hell over.

When they run their hands

down my body

I get the same erotic sensation,

it is the fingerprints they leave behind

that distinguishes their intentions…

While one leaves a tingling aftershock

the other dirties my senses

enough to make my skin crawl

six feet under.

It is hard to believe

that identical images

could create two distinctly

different interpretations.

When she leans slowly in

my lips tremble with

anticipation and fear

not knowing whether

 the next kiss

will fill my heart up

or bleed it dry.

Author's Note

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Very interesting to interpret. Twins... A common fantasy with men? On the other hand, it could be describing split personality or duality...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... it is not literally bout twins... besides I can hardly handle one let alone two, LOL

[Cwortknee]

A very interesting and thought provoking composition, and well written! Thanks for sharing!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for your time reading and commenting.

[Cwortknee]

My pleasure.

[Nautili]

Interesting read, duality mingled with individuality......that is what makes people so damn interesting!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You got a great point there... unpredictability helps keep you on your toes.

[Jordan's Back]

Wow Very Interesting.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Blue Ivory]

I love what you did towards the ending! You've made this a very fun and exciting read. The way you write keeps the reader interested.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much young lady.

[Jayden Spark]

I love this poem. Its sexy but in a dark way. Great jobs!

[Frieda P]

Sounds like ONE crazy woman to me! My son and my brother are married to actual twins that are sisters....now, that's crazy! Nice write...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh they are... that would be interesting, thanks for the review.

[Renée]

0o0o0o0 well now she should keep you on your....umm... toes? lol
Very interesting write !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, yes someone like that would.

[Seashell]

Good thing this is not really about actual TWINS right ?? Coz you wouldn't know which eye to look at first out of the 4 !!! tee hee
I liked this D.
xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

True that Babsie Boop. Thank you.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Men fantasize about twins .. Don't know if they ever look into their eyes, in these fantasies .. or even care what their fingertips feel like .. They just want the experience, just like every other silly man ..

Interesting Dale !! .. Jazz x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Interesting observation and most likely true, but this isn't really bout twins... thank you Jazzy xx

[J. J. Nightingale]

Ha .. I see .. dual personalities !! ..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is closer to the truth, coarse really poetry is about interpretation so what ever you take from it is correct :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

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