Fire, Wind And Rain(Nature's Balance)

 

When you have the mouth of a dragon

your words become the flame upon these pages

until your biography turns into your funeral pyre.

As the book goes up in flames

the wind carries your ashes towards the clouds

then the rain returns them to the circle of life,

that is the miracle of Mother nature.

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow :) brilliant!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Very unique read this one Dale...never quite heard the circle of life put in those terms. Love the 'mouth of the dragon'....brings it full circle. Nice one!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... I do try to find different views never seen before.

[Frieda P]

Mission accomplished. :-)

[SM Davis]

When you have the mouth of a dragon
your words become the flame upon these pages
until your biography turns into your funeral pyre.

Such strong words...and SO telling. mouth of a dragon...words burning to be said...to be written, to be read....yet fall on deaf ears. Righteous...poigniant...AND GLORIOUS! I like this new style. KEEP IT UP! 1000 DAISIES

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, you flatter me.

[SM Davis]

no flattery here...you know me better than that! :0) Just really good stuff.

[SparrowSong]

We are a part of everything and everything is a part of us, nice thought isn't it? Love this and love your unique way of expressing the ever present cycle of life.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I appreciate your feedback and taking the time to read my words.

[Circe]

a very powerful sweeping cycle... reminds me of the phoenix too.. this burning and regeneration is the beauty of things not staying the same... with each cycle comes new possibilities.. words of wisdom and wonder.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

What an excellent interpretation... thank you.

[Poetic Justice]

and it all starts again..lyrical take on the circle of life..(with a twist of course)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

There is always a twist, especially in my mind :)

[Enid Blake]

I love the cycle described in this!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is amazing! so much ponderous truths and musing is evident in this short little poem

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I love the first two lines ... much wisdom can be found in between those lines. "From the mouth of dragons ..." could come much upheaval and despair if not trained correctly (lol) Mother Nature is a force whom we cannot win against.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are so correct.

[MOON]

If you open your mouth only to spit venom that hastens your demise . Great imagery

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.