Reap What You Soul

Reap What You Soul

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

Treading the murky waters

when the arm isn’t long enough
to reach a helpless hand.

Only One finger above water

may ruin the soles of your shoes

but the heart will feel baptized

in a cool mountain stream.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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It takes work to help someone in need. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thank you sir.
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~ very interesting and profound word play in the title... ~ my interpretation of these incredibly poetic lines: when one experiences the depths of one's inadequacy, one is not in a position to extend "a helping hand" to anyone... but in that experience of smallness... humility is born... making one humane... enabling one to lend a helping hand in the future... thus, the "murky waters" turn into "a cool mountain stream"...

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I really like that interpretation.
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12 Years Ago

~ you're very welcome... :)

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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