Unsatisfied Cycle

another senryu

  

Standing in the sun

Makes me want for the shadows,

Vice versa it goes.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

We always want what we can't have; then, when we have it, we want otherwise. Man is suck a fickle and funny animal, but he can write some great poetry. :-) Great job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Linda

[SparrowSong]

Grass is always greener huh? We always want what we haven't got, and when we get it...it wasn't what we wanted at all. Perfectly expressed...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is so true... never satisfied is a common human error.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I love the depth in the seeming simplicity of this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[The Analog Kid]

This sums it up perfectly how my moods ebb and flow.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Tree]

The dichotomies of human nature, can be maddening.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh that is so true... as much as we want to change it we never do.

[Tree]

But we keep on fighting, don't we?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The human spirit will never die.

[KAOlmsted]

Yes!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hell yes :)

[KAOlmsted]

:-D

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a cycle of want... of wanting what is just beyond reach... and you say it here so pefectly.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well said sir.

[Ruth]

Ain't that the truth (wink) xox

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

most certainly is (you must have something in your eye) LOL xoxo

[Ruth]

lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

(wink) (wink) now it must have blown into mine :)

[Ruth]

;)

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~ indeed, indeed... superbly expressed...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

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:)

[Emberlorna]

Simple yet so true! I really like this piece :}

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)